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Melodic Eyes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The whirlpool of his eyes bedroom eyes of melodic blue flowing like the tides upon my lips of ocean dew deep into my being into the tempo of my soul eyes wander like a river patiently they stroll anticipating the moment in the shadows they seek play me like ebony and ivory my knees become weak seductive melody in his eyes lust written in his voice whispers upon my heart as moistened lips, gently part I fall into his trance love notes upon me prance eyes of melodic blue reflecting lips of a ruby hue "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." -- James Joyce [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-27-2002 09:23 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever see love reflect from his eyes and see tears of eternal promise cascade through every glimpse! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - not sure what is meant by melodic blue, but it sure is a sweet write. Liked this very much... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
my oh my...first the lips, now the eyes... I will save my eyes for tomorrow ~V lovely as always M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very romantic write....and the one lucky enough to be written about is a lucky one indeed.... nicely done! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
noah thank you dear one hugs bill..thanks bill..i added a few more words to go with the theme. Maybe you can see now what i meant by melodic eyes.. pat..thank you so much ..im happy you enjoyed naked..thank you dear friend hugss |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ Ohhhh YES my friend, the eyes can say so much....with out really speaking at all... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Victoria, Very sensual write. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"I fall into his trance love notes upon me prance eyes of melodic blue reflecting lips of a ruby hue" No one else can say it like you Victoria. Just lovely. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This calls for a big *SIGH* Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Lauren hugschris..thank you so much floria..thank you so much..and for peeking in sandra..thank you..nice to hear from you hugs |
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