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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-02-26 08:56 PM

A ritual of wonder
Ordained in light and thunder
The scent of sweet perfume
To dance beneath the moon

A sudden strong connection
To touch in sweet affection
The swirling nights and days
Awake in hearts ablaze

A calm and warm surrender
These gifts so sweet and tender
The passion as it swells
In honey as it wells

A banquet shared by each
One quest to now beseech
In compliment to walk
To sleep on pillow talk

A partner and a friend
A love that will not end
Through Autumn, into snow
Still dancing as we grow

A gentleness to live
A lifetime sought to give
In kisses softly set
As every dream is met

Copyright Kkh 2/26/02

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-02-26 09:06 PM

A ritual of wonder
Ordained in light and thunder
The scent of sweet perfume
To dance beneath the moon

A sudden strong connection
To touch in sweet affection
The swirling nights and days
Awake in hearts ablaze
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this has fabulous cadence and imagery...
it was a treat to read aloud.
very cool title...wonderful passionate write.
Welcome to Poetry Land ..nice to meet you

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-02-26 09:13 PM

Oh my. This just flows....I hope when you've posted enough poetry to get that little automatic submit button, that you will submit this to our main site here at PiP...lovely..just lovely..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-02-26 09:19 PM

ThisDiamond - lovely, like this one a lot.

'A gentleness to live
A lifetime sought to give'

these two lines are so true, just think about what they mean... Wouldn't it be nice.

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-26 09:32 PM

Kathleen, this is oh so lovely.
Read aloud it flows beautifully.
Just an all round wonderful piece.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-02-26 09:35 PM

You, are a mighty fine poet!
Wonderfully wonderfully done~

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2002-02-26 10:39 PM

I am going to enjoy reading your poetry...it is refreshing and thoughtful...thank you...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-26 10:44 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this so much, sweet friend, you have such wonderful amazing talent and your gorgeous heart always sings with the sweetest words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is absolutely beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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