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{{{I want to close my eyes to see you}}}
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{{{I want to close my eyes to see you}}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~I want to close my eyes to see you ~*~ I want to close my eyes to see you See you away from every day’s misery From noises That wrap up all my senses And make me unable to hear The sounds of you Coming near Make me unable to hear Your steps Coming close Unable to guess The way you chose I want to close my eyes to see you Devoid of all fogy smoky colors That seem to surround your eyes With sadness that always reaches me Across the miles I want to see you Devoid of all the grays That have wrapped up the world Even in midday See you Beyond the rays of the sun That seems to be crying for none None but we The ones who weaved up This painful mystery And wrote in blood The chapters of this highly accented misery I want to see you Beyond the hazy visions Of today’s predictions And tomorrow’s supposed fiction Beyond the paintings Drawn with crimson colors tainted brushes and weapons surrounding it framing it I want to close my eyes And not see The ashes on your shoulder Not know The painful stories Written in your folder But see you See you Standing near And I’d whisper words you could only hear Draw your smile With my own finger Praying that that smile Would forever linger I’d brush away The ashes you had by day And pray for rain to fall To clean you From all Oh… I just want to close my eyes And just see The words of me Written in codes On your face Drawn with twinkling looks In your eyes A feeling no one could surmise ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ * My muse has been silent for so long… I hope that what she has given me now is something that is worthy of your appreciation Thank you & special thanks for all those who wondered about me and embraced me with their warm hearts ********************* "Oh...me!Oh Life! Of the questions of these recurring.......... Of myself forever reproaching myself, for who more foolish than I......" ~Whitman~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (02-26-2002 08:49 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very worthy...so much so that I will place in my library to read over a few times..*s M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I'm glad to see you posting again  Your poem drew me in line after line, good stuff! (hugs) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Melody! I am so happy to see you. This is a beautiful poem, it speaks of so many deep subjects. I hope you are happy , and will be back to stay a while. Luv Sandra |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Thank you dear Moureen It's a privilege to choose my poem to be in your library... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rose Petal Thank you so much dear ... My muse has been awfully quite. I'm very glad that she finally gave me something worthy ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dearest Sandra I'm happy and privileged to have your kind friendship... I do hope I'd be able to spend more time here... Love & Hugs Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the muse has spoken well to you my friend. . . in a wonderful voice. . . welcome back. . . you have been gone for far too long indeed. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...we're all so happy to see you posting aagin, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! (kiss on cheek) May you continue to close your eyes and dream of the most beautiful things, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
...Sven... Thank you dear friend.. I'm glad that she did..  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ...Noah.... My ever sweet friend.. Thank you for your warm welcome...... I have missed you all ...& hoped that my muse takes pity on me which she finally did. {{{Hugsss}}} Thank you all.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice return.... worthy of attention indeed! Nice to see your words again.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So nice to see your words back after the short holiday our muse took, but I see she rested up and helped you create a beauty in this poem. This was simply lovely. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Ron Thank you dearly... I'm very glad that you think that way. And it is surely nice to be in this warm circle again... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Mysteria thank you dearest... I'm really happy that she has spoken well after her terrifying silence... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyEnchantedMelody~ A breathtaking beauty you have *gifted* us with~ 'And I’d whisper words you could only hear Draw your smile With my own finger Praying that that smile Would forever linger' Just L O V E L Y ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
vandana Thank you so much ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Marge Thank you sweet friend I'm very happy to know you loved it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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