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I Saw Her....Does She Hear??
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I Saw Her....Does She Hear?? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I saw her... Finally, for the first time. Her, this woman that.... That carries my heart in her hand. Did she? I don’t know, too far away.. Will she? Oh gosh, I certainly do hope... Hope desperately she will... For...once she does....we will.. I have to... I must do it...do it now.. For in just a flash, a glimpse.. She could be gone again.. Into the light...far away.. I will...I must... Scream...scream three words... Will her ears hear my cry, my plea. Will her heart be open to receive... my devotion, my love, my existence.. I can’t...simply can’t.. Can’t bear not having her here.. Here with my dreams, my hope. Within my life, even if only... If only for a moment, a second.. If she does... Does come into my life.. Does say yes....she hears my call. Take my heart into her arms.. Hold me as I hold her.. Then...only then...I will Live.....breath...exist in this world. For...without her...life is not. And I cannot bear that pain. Hear my cry....hear my words... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Resident Romantic love looks real good on you  this is wonderful!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes ...i could feel the yearning in your words..i like this one alot Mr. Valentino.. ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, will....will I? I must? Tell you? Oh ok, your poem is great, unique, creative and I love the last line, finally you got it out. great poem. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, this is a unique style and a change of pace for you. Well done, I might add. Enjoyed ever so much this evening...did she hear you?  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
those last three words were produced over and over within your write. *s Nice Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - most excellent my friend, very nice. A little different write but none the less, a very good one... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now why in the world would the strains of Roy Orbison find me through this one... oh yeah.... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...The heart of a soulmate always hears the heart of a soulmate. Your heart's cry rings throughout eternity and it must reach the heart that matches yours. LOVED the openness, the nakedness of your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! If she doesn't hear she must be deaf...this is absolutely magnificent, Magnus...so incredibly emotional...I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such yearning of true love fills your words, sweet friend, oohhhhhh...I know that every time you say those three words to her she will come running into your arms with tears of joy sliding down her face screaming yes! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fantastic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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