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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-02-26 06:09 PM

Kiss me with the desire of yearning lips
like the time by the aqua waterfalls
when love lit the candle of our embrace
cascading moonlight with kisses of fate
kiss me with adoring lips of pleasure
upon the slender branch of my neck
upon the seduction of my ear lobe
where sad songs of whispers linger
echoing softly of eternal love
kiss like the willows kissing the breeze
sway with rhythm of fluid branches
within the seductive tempo of the trees
hold me like the night holds the moon
hold me if only for a little while

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-26-2002 06:10 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-26 06:20 PM

(smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever hold love close to your heart and may he shower your heart with kisses with the smooth faithful and trusting spark of true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is very lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-02-26 06:24 PM

"hold me like the night holds the moon"-that is so lovely. Lovely.

Nan

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-02-26 06:57 PM

Well hell I hope he doesn't keep you waiting long.
I like the reference you made to the branch on your neck
and the tempo of the trees. Makes me *shiver*

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-26-2002 06:59 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-02-26 07:38 PM

"kiss like the willows kissing the breeze'
What a lovely thought. He'd better do it now. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-02-26 09:33 PM

a kiss can hold the night..can't it ~V..I wrote one tonight about a kiss too..so powerful they can be *s

M

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-02-26 09:38 PM

Vic, I was in the kiss theme today also. This is so romantic and lovely. We sure do need some nice kisses around this place!
Sandra

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-02-26 09:53 PM

thank you noah..

thank you nan..for peeking in

lori..thank you glad you enjoyed hugs

floria..thank you so much for your sweet comments hugss

sandra..everyone is in the smooching mood i guess haa..hugs

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2002-02-27 06:10 PM

Victoria,

Your imagery in this piece is very lovely, my friend.

*hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-02-27 06:26 PM

*sigh* sensually romantic and dreamy...therefore I couldn't help but love it..Magnificent feel and vision to this poem...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

10 posted 2002-02-27 06:32 PM

So very romantic, Victoria...I don't think I could even hold a candle to this one.

because its so beautiful!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2002-02-27 09:00 PM

Michael..thank you for peeking in..

Karen..thank your for your nice comments

Lyra..Thank you so much..and for visiting tonight

thank you so much barry ..nice to hear from you

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-02-27 09:03 PM

Vic....I always enjoy reading your poetry...
Romance is your name...and you paint it
so beautifully...

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

13 posted 2002-02-27 10:40 PM

"upon the seduction of my ear lobe
where sad songs of whispers linger
echoing softly of eternal love"

Victoria - This is a fine piece of writing. I really liked the line about the night holding the moon. Very good!

Dave

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2002-02-27 11:32 PM

~V~

You do indeed give passions a delightful name....lovely my friend...HUGS

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-02-27 11:51 PM

barry..thank you again this evening hugss

dave..nice to hear from you dave

lauren..thank you sweet friend ...hugss

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2002-02-28 01:41 AM

Romantically smooth Victoria...James

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

17 posted 2002-02-28 11:48 AM

thank you for reading james..im glad you enjoyed

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

18 posted 2002-02-28 02:22 PM

Sensual, smooth, and left me yearning...

your usual excellent work...I open each expecting to be wowed..and am rarely disappointed.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

19 posted 2002-02-28 02:33 PM

Wow thank you..what a response..ha..it inspires me to keep writing...

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