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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-26 05:12 PM

Run with me through the valley
Amongst the fields of Summer green
Let's lay down by the river
And listen to the water so serene

Swim with me in the ocean
Let's plunge into the depths of the sea
Down below we'll find a hidden treasure
A bounty of love for you and me

Come with me to paradise
Let's go to heaven you and I
Two souls forever united
As our love reaches for the sky

Walk with me along the seashore
As our love moves with the tide
This love we share is timeless
Such feelings we cannot hide

Bathe with me beneath the moonlight
By the light of the silvery moon
Immersed in our love forever
Our hearts play in perfect tune

Suetang

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-02-26 05:24 PM

Sue, this is absolutely beautiful!
Made me smile as I read it.
Such a happy and delightful poem.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2002-02-26 05:29 PM

beautiful

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-26 06:23 PM

(sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing with romance and makes me smile! (kiss on cheek) May you forever go to all the wonderful places you desire with your love, sweet freind, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-02-26 06:37 PM

Enjoyed hon...as always..hope all is well with you ..hugss

~Vic

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-02-26 07:55 PM

Sue...you just keep cranking out one superb
poem after another...Well done...very well
done..

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-02-27 04:39 PM

Oh did I love this...come and get me, and I will come with you anytime! Beautiful Sue.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-02-27 04:49 PM

Sue,
every romantic bone in my body is humming with this poem...I'm surprised you can't hear it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-02-27 05:07 PM

Beautiful poem Sue and I'm sure the settings you describe are equally lovely living where you do!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-02-27 05:24 PM

Whoa. It's getting sultry down under

Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-02-27 06:41 PM

Beautifully romantic Sue, You do these well. I loved reading this, it puts one in the mood. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

11 posted 2002-02-27 08:22 PM

Ahhh Sue, nature seems to amplify the passion of this poem. Beautifully penned dear friend!!!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

12 posted 2002-02-27 08:40 PM

"Immersed in our love forever
Our hearts play in perfect tune"

Such wonderfully romantic words. This was so light and springy and I found myself smiling through the whole poem. I love the way you write. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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