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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-26 01:31 PM



Hat Trick

you tried
to trick me
if trick me
is the word
and you don’t think
I caught it
or that
my ears heard
but I have
trained my ears
to filter out
the lies
and if that’s what
you are trying to do
sorry for your tries
a lie, a secret, and a trick
no, no this
will not be
and your trick and secret
they are safe
with me
there is only one thing
to make me believe
can you imagine that
anything else
is just a trick
and you might as well
be pulling a rabbit
out of a hat

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-02-26 01:40 PM


Right on!
That from a trained observer

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

jwesley
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2 posted 2002-02-26 01:42 PM


well and neatly said...as usual

jwesley

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3 posted 2002-02-26 02:56 PM




(sigh) Wow, this is soooooo powerfully expressive, sweet friend, there is indeed a difference between lies and trickery! May your love forever enchant you with true magic and forever be faithfully honest to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-02-26 02:59 PM


Helen I love this!!  Right on girl!!
~Hugs, Nancy~  

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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