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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-02-26 01:11 PM



The Dance


See the dance of the meadow
The grass swaying to and fro
Feel the freedom as your watching
The smiles as it grows

Like the meadow you too can dance
Turn the music up inside your heart
Don't shut it off and turn away
Open up and take part

I feel the freedom as you sway
I smile as I see you grow
Thank You for letting me in
For the tiney part I know


Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002
Feb. 26, 2002

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-26 03:18 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully upbeat poem, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sweet music to our ears and brings freedom of thought and love to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this sings with sheer joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-26 07:58 PM


Zinnser I could just see the grasses sway. beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-02-26 10:06 PM


Zinsser - I've danced in a meadow, exhilerating it was. Nice write...

BC

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4 posted 2002-02-26 10:27 PM


Connie, enjoyed so much!  I'm glad I didn't miss the dance.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Zinsser
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5 posted 2002-02-26 11:10 PM


Thank You All very very much....   : )
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