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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-02-26 01:09 PM



Just For Today


once I walked with shades on
then life ripped them off
full of fear from reality
I mourned the saftey I had lost

Tho at times I feel the panic
Seeing, Feeling far too much
no shades for me today, Thank You
Just for today, come what be
what must


Connie McDonald
copyright@2002
Feb. 26, 2002

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-26 03:15 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is soooooo beautifully emotional, sweet friend, it does take a lot of hope and faith to accept some things, but a slong as we love and believe in ourselves, what must and what will come will fill us with promise and joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-02-26 11:12 PM


Thanks Noah... You are far tooo kind... always... but I like it  : )
peaches73533
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3 posted 2002-02-27 02:29 AM


Sometimes it's better not to hide.Deal with it the best you can and move on.
peaches

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-02-27 06:19 AM


I've walked with shades on for far too long myself... these seems  a positive write, Z...nice *s
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5 posted 2002-02-27 08:20 AM


liked this.... nicely done!
Kethry
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6 posted 2002-02-27 08:45 AM


Zinsser,
Rip off your shades I say as long as you dont get blinded by the glare of your brilliance.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Zinsser
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7 posted 2002-02-27 09:05 AM


me thinks your all far too kind  LOL
Thanks  : )

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