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Open up the Door
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Open up the Door |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Open up the Door I confess addiction to lure The jewelry and dreams of the poor I confess addiction to style The beauty of schemes of my wile I confess to butterfly sighs The true addiction of my cries I confess to poetry rhymes That put me in touch with its times. Fly a world of total adore With constant addiction to more Make every green valley my goal And open the door to my soul. My hand is out to those would dream Those that would paint a lovely seem Those that would taste a bittersweet Those that would build a dream retreat I swear you’ll love yourself the more If you would open up this door |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"...and let the sun shine in..."..  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy it seems my morning, well actually it’s afternoon here, but whatever, it seems that my day isn’t complete without a visit to the Prince of Poetry. This is an absolutely fabulous and beautiful write, it simply shines with that special quality that is yours alone. Words don’t really express the feelings of wonder when my eyes caress the pen of you. And another plus Krissy hasn’t discovered you yet, so I don’t have to race her to read you. It’s just a game we play she and I, it adds a certain fillip to our visits here, I think it’s a mother daughter thing. Well, it is in my home anyway. Anyway this is as always simply superb, well done Seymour thank you for today’s taste of you Thank you for this wondrous delight  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Tis not a Pandora's lid nothing that I keep hid but throw open wide the door and let the multitudes roar! For winsome is as winsome does and wisdom delights us because when Sy sees a butterfly we hear the magic of Randy's sigh So bring the tea, jam and bread and before us then a feast is spread then when the Queen Moth comes to light all is well, and Sy is bright... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-26-2002 08:54 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I confess to butterfly sighs The true addiction of my cries I confess to poetry rhymes That put me in touch with its times. Fly a world of total adore With constant addiction to more ================================== My hand is out to those would dream Those that would paint a lovely seem ======================================= I swear you'll love yourself the more If you would open up this door ====================================== Well, you know by now I would follow you anywhere  Your poetry is the sugar in me tea and warm in my morn, love the message in the moral of your rhymes Stinky. I'm always beating a path to your door  *ww* |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful........ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
your wish is my command..... i confess..... the Dor is OPEN!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, love ya.Mushy, Always a delight to read. Sunshine, you are my sunshine.JM, I know I'll get powdered butterfly color on my lips, but who cares. WW R S. Zinsser, Thank you. Vandana, And thank you. Doreen, See what I can do. Love |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for posting this beautiful, uplifting poem, Sy Fly a world of total adore With constant addiction to more Make every green valley my goal And open the door to my soul. Somehow the door to my soul remains locked, but I know I have the key...SOMEWHERE! I am just so scatter brained that I lose everything...especially keys  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour YES indeed open the door and LIVE LIVE LIVE. what else is there to do.. great write. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Madame C, You misplaced your keys in your own house, they are there. Floria, You have the answer. *L* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice, very! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passing Shadows, Thank you for the very nice. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds like a blueprint to self-contentment to me, Sy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...you sound so happy in these words, sweet friend, yes, yes, may we all open the doors of life and find joy and dreams to cherish forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, It does doesn't it. Thank you Noah. |
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