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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-02-26 07:35 AM

You reach out
to me loving me
so passionately
my body responds
losing control
in a bliss of desire
that only you hold
But it is my soul
that you entrap
and you seduce it
with all your might
and it's tempted
and it sins for you
and I realize the
power of you
and it scares me a little
to have fallen
so deep into you
but I feel helpless
and I can't get free
and I don't want to
and I confess
that I like the way
that your love spreads
taking over
full control
and dominating my soul

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-02-26 08:30 AM

Walker darling heart this is simply outstanding writing, you have done so well here I don’t know how you do it. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional.

I had this feeling, this total annihilation of self in another, I’m not sure if I like it that much, I prefer to love with love, but I understand the addiction

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-26 08:47 AM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, it too always amazes me how love can take over our whole hearts with joy and cheer! (kiss on cheek) May the magic of love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-02-26 01:08 PM

I hate giving in. . . but sometimes. . .

great job here walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-02-26 01:32 PM

Don't you love it when it, literally...takes your breath away?

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-02-26 01:40 PM

very well done, my friend
jwesley

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-02-28 12:49 PM

Enjoyed...James

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

7 posted 2002-02-28 09:02 PM

You never mince words, you always get straight to the heart of the matter...and very effectively too I might add...whew...wonderfully done!

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