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rwood
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0 posted 02-26-2002 06:29 AM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rwood


He brings me moments
wrapped in time’s respire
I am wordless in offering
I can only feel
Uncontrollably

I may laugh with my heart
I may cry
tears that slide
tenderly as a woman’s should
when touched

Each time is different
as if the first
New again and again

Tiny seconds tied
with a single ribbon
streaming
accepting each as a gift

Sometimes I am mesmerized
in ancient charm
Each glance I am chanced
to be in his eyes
I fall weak
I memorize his words
ticking, discrete

even feverish
I become
for more

completely anxious
in instances
when my strength
slips from me
and drains my patience
when I must
go without him

how I’d steal away
behind the clock
in shameless
untamed momentum

where I’d search for his lips
and press one finger there
Knowing the words
longing to be declared

as a stare of silence
steals the notion
in love’s brazen continuum
becoming rapt in a bodily recital
© Copyright 2002 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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Dear Regina, lovely to read your beautiful words tonight, you express yourself so well, one would be lucky to be so blessed as to have the care of your sincere heart, I hope that your words are read aloud to he, pages should not hide these thoughts, but be shown and treasured.
Nice to find your work once again,

Sincerely Rick
Dark Stranger
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a gift of eyes
and thoughts
and heart edges

you bless him here

lovely work rwood
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(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful and softly sensual, sweet friend, may your loving heart forever beat in the rhythm of loves song and may you be alone in each others dreams of joy forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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4 posted 02-26-2002 08:43 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Bravo! You show us again the talent with words and images I have come to admire.

Sunshine
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Absolutely
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Breathtaking...
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just out of reach


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where I’d search for his lips
and press one finger there
Knowing the words
longing to be declared

rwood - being wrapped up in a man such as this..ooooooh it drives me crazy!!
lol.  wonderful write dear poetess. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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enjoyed
Janet Marie
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He brings me moments
wrapped in time's respire
I am wordless in offering
I can only feel
Uncontrollably

I may laugh with my heart
I may cry
tears that slide
tenderly as a woman's should
when touched
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how I'd steal away
behind the clock
in shameless
untamed momentum

where I'd search for his lips
and press one finger there
Knowing the words
longing to be declared

as a stare of silence
steals the notion
in love's brazen continuum
becoming rapt in a bodily recital

======================================

oh good grief!!! Does he have a brother???? rofl
Breathtaking indeed...and how clever of you to write of "untamed momentum" and then do just that with the poem...your pace increased as the passion did till you took us to the creshendo ... and OH MY what a creshendo it tis.....

"becoming rapt in a bodily recital

have mercy baby..... *L*
nothing left to do but sigh...and sign off in poetic and passionate envy

very very cool write Regina...
how wonderful to be this inspired .
jm

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

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rwood~

Amazing...write....


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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The Shores of Alone


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What a wonderful way to feel about someone.  You are so fortunate. You write glowingly of love.
Sandra
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breathtaking. . . yes. . . that's a word that I would use for this. . .

Regina, you never cease to amaze. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

RMW
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Quite delicate, and intimate as suggested by the title. "Rapt" is excellent. (Must re-read again, then back). I like the way you've made the title work. I think that sometimes we forget how much the title "wants" to say. Very, very good. Bob
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My dear friend, you are quite possibly the best romantic writer I have EVER read.  I know when I see your name and read your poems there is going to always be this huge sigh at the end, and this time was certainly no exception.  It is like you have a love paint box, and this is your canvas (well you know what I mean right LOL).  Hugs, fantastic once again!

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Suetang
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Hello Regina

So much beauty in your words.  This was lovely.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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Each glance I am chanced
to be in his eyes
I fall weak
I memorize his words
ticking, discrete

Love brings such emotions out of us. There’s no feeling like that breathlessness, that pounding of the heart. I love the way you’ve written these feelings. Very cool Regina.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Reg,
And what a recital...I love you for these poems. Awesome!
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You amaze me once more.
peaches
Janet Marie
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*library*

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MORE!  

*hugs*

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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*BUMP*

[This message has been edited by Larry C (04-04-2002 01:39 AM).]

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This poem must bring the man you write of such pleasure.  
It is truly a gift and I can't help but envy your tender expression.

You've a lovely heart Regina~  

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-04-2002 01:34 AM).]

JamesMichael
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Very nice to read...James
Janet Marie
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still searching for "flaccid" ....
funny thing...all I keep finding is poetry that soothes my soul and makes me wanna borrow your muse

ok...I'm done or maybe its undone....
yeah thats me....flaccidly undone. LOL

later-girlie-girl-gator
mothyme

We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ... but the fall from the height.

E. McCain

Mark Bohannan
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He brings me moments
wrapped in time’s respire
I am wordless in offering
I can only feel
Uncontrollably

I may laugh with my heart
I may cry
tears that slide
tenderly as a woman’s should
when touched

***************

Look what I found!!!!!!!!  okay, so that IS the ONLY way to find it in your works but hey, you should see what I found in JM's "Promised Sky" right below this post!!!
I guess she didn't tell you that I was so persistant in proving a point did she?? ROFL  

Now relax and keep feeding us those wonderful works of yours so we can fatten up our poetic minds.
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