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god woke me with his laughter

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 02-26-2002 05:43 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

today again
I talked to God about you
and how I feel born again now
like the first time
and how our adultery
is a blessing
that makes me believe
in heaven again

I know he knows you
have seen him looking
at your eyes
and your walk ways
have heard him talk
to the flowers
about your perfume
and how they could do better

he gave me a gift of dreams
that never let me touch you
I was free to watch
and stand outside
where you had your back to me
and didn't even know
I was there
except you felt me

like you had known me once
before somewhere
and always wondered
whatever happened
when I went away
and didn't come back
or write
God woke me with his laughter

before you ever met me...


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SEA
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with you


1 posted 02-26-2002 09:43 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"he gave me a gift of dreams
that never let me touch you

I was free to watch
and stand outside
where you had your back to me
and didn't even know
I was there
except you felt me

like you had known me once
before somewhere
and always wondered
whatever happened
when I went away
and didn't come back
or write

God woke me with his laughter

before you ever met me... "

D,
your writing amazes me....
completely.

and this part here, goes deeper than any words I have...
saving this....
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Member Patricius
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Posts 10848
In Your Poetic Mind


2 posted 02-26-2002 10:36 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

DS~

It is amazing the gifts that life can bring, and how some touch us so differenty then others..(of course).....

I continue to watch as the raven flies over my soul, and deems the words that bring us poetry....softer touches...ya know I enjoy this....


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Martie
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3 posted 02-26-2002 11:13 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

DS

This came from a truth place
where sometimes words have their way

Well done!

[This message has been edited by Martie (02-26-2002 12:09 PM).]

rwood
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4 posted 02-26-2002 11:39 AM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

I believe you have wakened a place deep within us all. Except your voice and your verse just expresses the soul of it better than I could possibly say. Spirit words D...touching and very loving.

Sincerely,
Regina
Indigo
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5 posted 02-26-2002 11:46 AM       View Profile for Indigo   Email Indigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Indigo

gift of dreams offer
new vision for jaded eyes
belief in the heart


Who knows why some people cross our life path... whether this life or a previous one.
But I think we sense them when they do.  Insightful and heartfelt, DS.  Loved this...

Indigo

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6 posted 02-26-2002 12:50 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is fantastic. without going into detail, let's just say I can relate. This is a keeper for me! Bravo, my friend!
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 02-26-2002 04:59 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

he gave me a gift of dreams
that never let me touch you
I was free to watch
and stand outside
where you had your back to me
and didn't even know
I was there
except you felt me

Nice touch in this phrase~
some things we just know
and never feel ...
likewise some things we feel
but never know the way they touch another.
Always a good write from you DS.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


8 posted 02-26-2002 05:17 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Dark, I understand this.
It touches me some place deep within my soul.
Excellent write!
Enjoyed, and I'm keeping this!
~Hugs and Sighs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Dark Stranger
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since 03-19-2001
Posts 13647
West Coast


9 posted 02-26-2002 05:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

SEA, a place in the heart
feels things
that our hands don't recognize

thank you for your eyes here

Lauren, ravens are white sometimes
when they fly close to the sun

thank you

Ms Martie, truth places are recognized by
true place eyes, thank you for yours

Rwood, spirit words, we share them
sometimes we say them without our voices
I appreciate you here

Indigo ms your eyes on the word voices are
a gift of dreams, thank you for your eyes

Serenity, we are one when you relate
to the images of our souls, we are one then
thank you so much

Lori, when we just know it
from feelings,
it is a thousand words better
than one word
thank you so much
Honeybee
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since 12-26-1999
Posts 5512
Ontario, CANADA


10 posted 06-19-2004 11:09 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

I'm glad that I decided to look through your archive of poems....I relate to this and am in love with this poem.  You're fast becoming one of my favourite poets at Passions...you have such a rare talent.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Margherita
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Eternity


11 posted 10-24-2007 05:51 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I was tempted tonight to go diving in your archives and found such incredible treasures!!

Outstanding work.

Take the bow of my heart.

Love,
Margherita
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 10-24-2007 06:03 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms honeybee, thank you

__________
ms mar, transparent seams
would be heavenly
thank you
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


13 posted 02-12-2008 03:11 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

quote:
he gave me a gift of dreams
that never let me touch you
I was free to watch
and stand outside
where you had your back to me
and didn't even know
I was there
except you felt me

like you had known me once
before somewhere
and always wondered
whatever happened
when I went away
and didn't come back
or write
God woke me with his laughter

before you ever met me...

You write truth well enough...
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 03-19-2001
Posts 13647
West Coast


14 posted 02-12-2008 04:41 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sun...wish you were here in the warm..thanks babe
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