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Another Kiss
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Another Kiss |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Another Kiss As I contemplate these thoughts of here and now I wonder at your dreams my love This world of yours so familiar and so different do you welcome me in the twilight of sleep These five nights in your arms rush by as if the wind like the butterfly I am carried to unknowns Soon the circle will be whole and I will be home but what will be left of this touch.... Your scent I take in memoried lockets of wish to caress my thoughts as you did my skin Will the northern winter numb this parting to come and that empty bed ever understand your warmth What will happen to this memory that permeats my senses, when this taste of you on my lips is gone... Oh but my smile may not soon forget these moments or those passioned kisses.. Ten days seems hardly a second to share, but an eternity to ever forget... Until then I still have five nights to contemplete, and asleep there you wait... Another kiss then my love, but not to awake, hmmmm, well we'll see... James Parker Haley Feb 26, 2002 [This message has been edited by Parker (02-26-2002 01:16 PM).] |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
This is beautiful and gently passionate. Thanks for sharing it. Neha:p |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sounds like cupid's aim is true up your way. Beautiful poem, Park. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your heart forever be showered in cupids arrows with the one you share your dreams with and may you share a lifetime of happiness with the one you love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Parker darling boy this is simply outstanding writing, you have done so well here I don’t know how you do it. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception. This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this, truly outstanding writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This world of yours so familier and so different do you welcome me in the twilight of sleep These five nights in your arms rush by as if the wind like the butterfly I am carried to unknowns Soon the circle will be whole and I will be home but what will be left of this touch.... Your scent I take in memoried lockets of wish to caress my thoughts as you did my skin Will the northern winter numb this parting to come and that empty bed ever understand your warmth What will happen to this memory that permeats my senses, when this taste of you on my lips is gone... Oh but my smile may not soon forget these moments or those passioned kisses.. Ten days seems hardly a second to share, =========================================== what NO rhyme?  Ok...I'll forgive it this time...after all, you are a bit distracted  BUT oh so well inspired. Beautiful write P-man...like a diary page whispered aloud. (3 words ... frequent flyer miles) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice James. Kisses as warm and wanting as these make for wonderful memories that can last and last. Me It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and yet, it is hopeful but still kind of sad. Two typos, dear one: familiar and until. peace, Cor |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you make a girls knees weak..... would have been nice to hear you recite this one.....  |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Wonderful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Parker. Hope all goes well...yes, this should be whispered as a page from a diary...please continue to share your thoughts with us. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautifully written. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Spirit Of Twilight, thank you. Dee, thanks my friend.. but he's a finicky lad. Noah, thank you as always. Marsha, thank you so much for the overwhelming compliments. Janet, thanks... sometimes you gotta chuck the rhyme to get the feeling... especially if your reading from a diary. Marina, thank you... yes they can. Corinne, thank you sweet poet. Your better then a spell checker and much sweeter. SEA, well if your knee's are getting weak my job is done. (smiles) J.K.. thank you. Nancy, well i'd better be careful reading that diary it may need to go in adult. (sly smile) SueTang, thank you. Parker |
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