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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-02-26 03:20 AM


voices confused
falling
slipping

mergintoeachother
like rain with ground
creating puddles
for my words to frolick in.
Negative and positive inspiration
baffles all the me's
making them almost betray each other
with same themes
same promises
same styles
like catty women
not flattered by imitation
(accidental or not)
but affected by it
each one wanting claim
that what they wear in words
is the definitive tone
of all others like them.
and there you have
a bickering
high pitched
and loud cluster of voices
clouding clear understanding
obscene in their quest for attention
and that obscenity
is the ill mannered action
of speaking out of turn
or all at once.
needing alias control
like animal control
to assist me
with an out of control pack
of passion driven wolves
who are all salivating
for some morsel of the spotlight.


For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2002-02-26 06:05 AM


well done!!!!!
it is a pleasure to
see the hectics of your bare
as you pound this one out..

enjoyed it tempt

MissNTrope
Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 43

2 posted 2002-02-26 08:28 AM


Ya think????

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-02-26 09:12 AM


Oh I agree, for sure!
LOL...Hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-02-26 09:15 AM


mergintoeachother
like rain with ground
creating puddles
for my words to frolick in.
Negative and positive inspiration
baffles all the me's
making them almost betray each other
with same themes
same promises
same styles


yep....

Sven
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Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2002-02-26 01:07 PM


I'm wondering which me is writing this reply. . . well, let me tell you, it's not the methatyou'rethinkingof. . .

it's me. . .

I liked the presentation here. . . the fact that all of us have these "me's" in us. . . great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-02-26 09:37 PM


wish when I grow up I can learn to write  like you *s  

everything you write touches a nerve in me somehow..that's a good thing*s

Maureen

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