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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-02-25 07:34 PM


Snow Blossoms

Diamond feathers in fluttered flight
Calm tranquil in chilled descent
Oh how you paint this winter night
In bright and downy cover

Like precious gems come to rest
After a long arduous journey
Prolonged respite your sole quest
To lie layered in your beauty

Such awe and wonder you arouse
Suspended in cradled bloom
White blossoms adorning boughs
Birthing soft snow flowers

Brian Beaudry



© Copyright 2002 Brian Beaudry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-25 07:37 PM


Brian, I don't know what it is about your writing, but if you ever write a poetry book please let me know. I could read this over and over. Lovely words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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2 posted 2002-02-25 07:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too would love a copy of your poetry book whenever you get one published, this should definitely be published! (big huggggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always blossom with beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-25 07:49 PM


This is simply beautiful my friend.
Wonderful images here...and after tomorrow's storm you will be able to write of yet another layer of white....
*keep your stick on the ice*
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Suetang
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4 posted 2002-02-25 08:00 PM


Hello Brian

Thank you for showing me Spring as you see it.  I would love to see the beginning of Spring after snow - something I have never seen.  This was beautiful.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

brianbeaudry
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5 posted 2002-02-25 08:36 PM


Floria..you humble me with your praise dear friend

Noah...you have been a close friend since I first started writing and I thank you

Enchantress...thank you southern neighbor yes..47cm of snow in 2 days last week and another 30cm forcasted for tomorrow..I need help shovelling!!!

Sue....thank you for your kind comment, believe me, after last week and what is forcasted for tomorrow, you are looking at one person that is more than anxious for spring!!!

[This message has been edited by brianbeaudry (02-25-2002 08:48 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-02-25 09:05 PM


Bb...nice,  very soft and visual....I could
feel them landing on my face....

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7 posted 2002-02-27 11:21 AM


Oh Brain, this is so beautiful....Last night it snowed like that and driving home I felt the magic in it all...*sigh* it was one of those nights where the full moon was out and yet it was snowing and it was warm...a perfect night to go for a walk with a lover...Thank you for writing this magnificent poem....I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-02-27 02:43 PM


I love the snow and we just have not had enough of it this year....so I have to view it from your words *s
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9 posted 2002-02-27 02:55 PM


How very beautiful, Brian...thank you for showing me.
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10 posted 2002-02-27 02:59 PM


brian, oh, this is lovely and going into my library. Chris

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