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Open Poetry #19

Romantic Interlude

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-02-25 06:53 PM

Romantic Interlude

Romantic interlude with you
Who would have thought, or knew

Gamblers never expected us to stay together
No one thought we would make it through

Best twenty four hours of my life
And babe, you know weve spent a few

Dinner, Dancing, Frank Sanatra style
Laughing, teasing, ejoyed the old people too

You made me feel so beautiful
With those piercing eyes of blue

Should I talk of the Suite
I dont know, no one would believe it true

Perfection in classic luxury
That we ruined with sweat clean through

Hey! was there even a bed in there
Who cares I was wrapped up in you

Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002
Feb. 25, 3:45 pm

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-25 06:56 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute and beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever share many timeless romanticm memories like this with your love and cherish them forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-02-26 12:02 PM

~Smiling~ I enjoyed your form

Maureen

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-02-26 12:15 PM

Very nice..James

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2002-02-26 12:52 PM

LOL... Thanks... I enjoyed this too : )

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-02-27 12:46 PM

I just loved the free feeling ending in your poem.
Who cares is right!!

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2002-02-27 01:17 AM

I love the flow of this write.The feeling of being lost in one's love can be utterly breathtaking and amazing.
Peaches

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2002-02-27 09:09 AM

Thanks Blue and Peaches..... very much..

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