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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-02-25 06:33 PM


Rejuvinate


Sun shining throught the trees
Beams glistening on the leaves

The hint of blossoms in the air
Intimate intrigue for all the bees

Snows melt has the brook running
Smell the freshness in the breeze

Heart and life rejuvinate
Springs newness brings me thease


Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002
Feb. 25, 2002
3pm



© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-25 06:34 PM


*sigh* Yes...spring is coming and with it new love...Beautiful...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-02-25 06:34 PM


Connie, I love it.
Check your last word

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Professor Gloom
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3 posted 2002-02-25 06:47 PM


Rejuvenate

Sun shining through the trees
Beams glistening on the leaves
Spring prisms in drops of dew

The hint of blossoms in the air
Intimate intrigue for all the bees
That flies to every flowing hue

Snows melt has the brook running
Smell the freshness in the breeze
follow the stream to where it goes to

Heart and life rejuvenate
Springs newness brings me these
I pause to enjoy all that’s new

~

A nice Ghazal
Hope you don’t mind a little add to it

Gloom

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4 posted 2002-02-25 06:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, yes, yes, the beauty of spring is coming, and may it fill all our hearts with blossoming thoughts of joy and flowers of hope! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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5 posted 2002-02-25 07:30 PM


Thank You Very much...
Yes I know about my spelling  : )

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6 posted 2002-02-25 07:42 PM


Zinsser, I could smell spring just reading this. lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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