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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-02-25 04:20 PM


When life is getting me down
And I'm feeling sad and low
There's one place that brings me comfort
And into my dreams is where I'll go

My dreams always give me shelter
I can say just what I feel
It's the place I can always find you
Visions of you seem so surreal

You reach out for my hand
And draw me closer to you
We sit on the sand for hours
Admiring the ocean views

You are never quick to judge me
You're a burning ember in my heart
I wish my dreams could last forever
So we would never be apart

But in the stillness of the night
I feel the pillow next to me
Only emptiness I feel
And darkness is all I see

But I know when I close my eyes
Mr. Sandman takes me far
Immersed in dreams of you
I just follow the brightest star

Suetang

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1 posted 2002-02-25 06:31 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I can't believe this got to Page 2 with no comments, this is an outstanding treasure of love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever catch a falling star in your heart and hold true love close! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-25 10:14 PM


Sue:  This one is very poignant!  Thanks for sending it to me. What would we do without dreams?

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-02-25 10:35 PM



Ah Sue...little did I know I would be writing for you tonight, but apparently I did...you'll find it...if you want to...

LOL...but seems to me we're ESP'ing tonight...good for us!

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