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arthur
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0 posted 2002-02-25 02:27 PM



  The Dream seller
( a street vendors cry)

  Come Buy! Come Buy!
  Listen for my bell.
  Listen to what I sell.
  Come Buy ! Come  Buy!

  I have dreams of tender lovers,
  Or of a Maid surpassing fair.
  Of golden nights when you discover ,
  The answer to your silent prayer.

   Let me weave my magic for you.
   Bring love and joy to you this night.
   Before the coming of mornings dew ,
   Loving transports of pure delight.

   Come Buy! Come Buy !
   Answer to my bell.
   Go to your bed and lie,
   Pay me well! Pay me well!

arthur
well its a change form muffins  
  

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RSWells
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1 posted 2002-02-25 02:39 PM


Reminds one of Oliver Twist. Enjoyed
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2 posted 2002-02-25 03:49 PM


arthur - I enjoyed this read and could almost see the seller calling out. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-02-25 03:52 PM


Arthur, great imagery here!  This is one of if not your best.  I agree with Richard, it does remind much of something from Oliver Twist!  Well done poet sir!
~Hugs across the pond to you, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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