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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-02-25 12:02 PM


Destiny's River

Rainbow Bridge of broken dreams
Where truth isn’t all it seems
Walk with me down roads of fate
That take us to decision gate

Don’t hesitate make your choice
Speak now with freedoms voice
Give life all you have to give
Now is your time to live

Day by day there's your chance
Find in it your time to dance
Don’t wait until it’s far too late
Pick up your chosen fate

Along the road you’ll find you
Do all that you wish to do
Refuse to learn this lesson well
Indecision leads to hell

Rainbow Bridge is broken now
So cross the river anyhow
Somewhere somehow you’ll be free
Go and find your liberty

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (02-25-2002 12:03 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-25 12:21 PM


A delicious Mushy. Well done girl I'm with you all the way.
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2 posted 2002-02-25 12:23 PM


A new "bridge over troubled waters" and I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-02-25 01:02 PM


Loving this one Mushy!  What a wonderful feel it has!  And, it left me smiling!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-02-25 09:36 PM


Marsha - how did I miss this I ask myself, and myself said,'I don't know'.. Nice write you have here with many words of truth...

BC

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5 posted 2002-02-25 09:39 PM


Rainbow Bridge is broken now
So cross the river anyhow
Somewhere somehow you’ll be free
Go and find your liberty


Says it all for me....love this Marsha~


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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6 posted 2002-02-25 10:00 PM



Ah...got me!  Good!

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7 posted 2002-02-25 10:45 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may we all believe in ourselves and our dreams and find true justice in our hearts! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mushy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-02-25 10:54 PM


Marsha this is such a very beutiful poem. Your poetry just gets better and better and better.

I love it, darling girl! And I love you, too, Mushy!

((Marsha))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-02-25 11:07 PM


I really enjoyed this one, Marsha...

Rainbow Bridge of broken dreams
Where truth isn’t all it seems
Walk with me down roads of fate
That take us to decision gate

It is so very beautiful and so well written...thanks for sharing it with us.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-02-25 11:34 PM


lovely,  and who doesn't love a rainbow...your presentation was nice too. *s
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