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Hallucination
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0 posted 2002-02-25 06:58 AM


"All That You Ask For"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved


V1:
Girl I fell in love with you right away,
With one hello you took my breath away.
I've been thinking of you ever since then,
Since I opened my heart to let you in.
You have been taking up all of my time,
And there is not a day that passes by.
When I don't see your sweet beautiful smile,
To get to you I'd walk a million miles...

C:
I'm covered in thoughts about loving you,
And holding you close in bed girl it's true.
There's nothing I would rather do tonight,
Then to kiss you and lay down by your side.
Make you feel like you've never felt before,
And I will give you all that you ask for.

V2:
A moment in time that's all that we are,
But no matter what I'll donate my heart.
To the love we have deep inside of us,
And that's were we'll go when the times get tough.

C:
I'm covered in thoughts about loving you,
And holding you close in bed girl it's true.
There's nothing I would rather do tonight,
Then to kiss you and lay down by your side.
Make you feel like you've never felt before,
And I will give you all that you ask for.

C:
I'm covered in thoughts about loving you,
And holding you close in bed girl it's true.
There's nothing I would rather do tonight,
Then to kiss you and lay down by your side.
Make you feel like you've never felt before,
And I will give you all that you ask for.

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (02-25-2002 07:06 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-02-25 07:50 AM


I'm covered in thoughts about loving you,


love the thought itself..*s

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2002-03-02 04:16 PM


nice song, I can only imagine what the music sounds like...great verses
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