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Perhaps One Kiss?
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Perhaps One Kiss? |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
How many kisses would we kiss? Fair Rose, but one; I tell you this, A single sup of lips of wine, I would be yours, you would be mine, For with one kiss, I’d cede control, Give you mine heart, give you mine soul, For you are splendor of the night, The shining jewel of heavens bright, Your satin lips, your mouth of fire, Would burn in me, your heart’s desire, As our lips as one would press, rapture Would spread as fire’s wild, you would encapture In love’s abyss, me forever with single kiss, For with one kiss, you’d carry me, eternally, to passion’s bliss. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"For with one kiss, I’d cede control, Give you mine heart, give you mine soul," Okay. Just one. Trillion?  God, but yer good. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow....this is so incredibly romantic....sigh  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very romantic Tim, One kiss just wouldn't be enough |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim Such beauty in your words, such passion when you speak of Rose. I love it when you write like this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwww, this is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the love of your life forever shower you with kisses and fill your heart with eternal happiness! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-25-2002 09:27 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
For with one kiss, you’d carry me, eternally, to passion’s bliss. Ahhh, now there's a place I would love to be carried off to!!Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Breathtaking... |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Tim, This enchanting...sensual and beautiful! Thanks for the wonderful read! Neha |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Yes, beautiful sensual poem Tim. "For you are splendor of the night, The shining jewel of heavens bright," Beautiful lines. floria Floria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very romantic...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very lovely, I enjoyed it. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
{{sigh......}} |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Passion's bliss from one touch igniting fires within Eager while wanting much of lips caressing mine *sigh* this poem sure melted me this morning...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Sonnet sings! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
*sigh* There you go taking my breath away again! *sigh* |
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