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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-02-24 09:09 PM


At the heart of true joy there lies deepest sorrow
The passage to bridge yesterday and tomorrow
To ride the wave in, we must take the tide out
On the sea of emotion, to be tossed all about

As the heart to the fore takes the brunt of the force
In the storm as in silence navigate of a course
For the ship to come in, on a journey commence
As the solitude heals of what love does expense

While the numbness of pain radiates of the nerves
In a singular focus finds the swelling and swerves
To adjust and admire this craft we resist
At the time as we heal, to recover what's missed

Copyright Kkh 2/24/02


© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-24 09:12 PM




(sigh) So very sad but true, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all who live in loneliness and I pray that in the heart of the sorrow new hope and joy is found! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-02-24 09:39 PM


This Diamond dear heart, this is a very well written and heartfelt poem. You show a lot of wisdom in this.

Welcome to Passions

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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3 posted 2002-02-24 11:02 PM


A good deal of wisdom in this sprakling piece, diamond lady
BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2002-02-24 11:31 PM


There is so much wisdom in your words!

Thank you for this, and *welcome*

This was such a very nice poem to read!!

amusemi
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5 posted 2002-02-24 11:49 PM


Yes, very wise.  I so enjoy your work.


Duncan
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6 posted 2002-02-24 11:56 PM


Welcome to PIP!  Great, insightful write.  BTW...love your critique message.  Will look forward to reading more from you.
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