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amigo
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the earth school

0 posted 2002-02-26 12:16 PM






Out my window, I see the deep blue sky
To whom Ms. Earth is sending out a loud cry
Her arms are stretched way up high
She is so thirsty, parched and dry
Her pleas are for the gray clouds to stop by
So She could wish Mr. Drought, a good-bye.

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-02-26 12:35 PM


Clever write, and a nice angle on the picture~  
amigo
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2 posted 2002-02-26 04:17 PM


Thank you Ms.Blues...i appreciate your stopping by and your words here....
Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
3 posted 2002-02-26 08:00 PM


Hey Amigo, that's great. Blue sky???
Overhere we've a real storm going on and rain didn't stop for days now.

Great verse, thanks

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

amigo
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4 posted 2002-02-27 02:29 PM


Titia...thank you for the challenge & your words here...you know what, send some rain here after you've had your share...we need it...waiting...
VAS
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5 posted 2002-03-26 05:28 PM


beautiful pic!!! Is that really outside your window???

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-03-26 05:43 PM


Amigo~
Just beautifully written my friend~
A lovely blending of photo and ink~

Aren't you just having so much fun being a poet ! !

It's just wonderful to watch your growth~
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2002-03-26 07:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may Mother Nature come and bring springs rain to all of her creations and have springs enchantment blossom before all our very eyes! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amigo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-03-26 08:45 PM


I absolutely adore this Amigo! That picture goes great with your words!!!
cottage
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9 posted 2002-03-26 08:51 PM


I really enjoyed reading this Amigo!

~ cottage

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10 posted 2002-03-26 10:48 PM


I'd say you met that challenge very well, amigo....you paint a very realistic picture here..
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