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A Prayer - Titia's challenge....

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amigo
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0 posted 02-26-2002 12:16 PM       View Profile for amigo   Email amigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amigo





Out my window, I see the deep blue sky
To whom Ms. Earth is sending out a loud cry
Her arms are stretched way up high
She is so thirsty, parched and dry
Her pleas are for the gray clouds to stop by
So She could wish Mr. Drought, a good-bye.

Titia's challenge http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum7/HTML/000422.html



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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 02-26-2002 12:35 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Clever write, and a nice angle on the picture~  
amigo
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2 posted 02-26-2002 04:17 PM       View Profile for amigo   Email amigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amigo

Thank you Ms.Blues...i appreciate your stopping by and your words here....
Titia Geertman
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Hey Amigo, that's great. Blue sky???
Overhere we've a real storm going on and rain didn't stop for days now.

Great verse, thanks

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

amigo
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4 posted 02-27-2002 02:29 PM       View Profile for amigo   Email amigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amigo

Titia...thank you for the challenge & your words here...you know what, send some rain here after you've had your share...we need it...waiting...
VAS
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5 posted 03-26-2002 05:28 PM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

beautiful pic!!! Is that really outside your window???

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 03-26-2002 05:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amigo~
Just beautifully written my friend~
A lovely blending of photo and ink~

Aren't you just having so much fun being a poet ! !

It's just wonderful to watch your growth~
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may Mother Nature come and bring springs rain to all of her creations and have springs enchantment blossom before all our very eyes! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amigo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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I absolutely adore this Amigo! That picture goes great with your words!!!
cottage
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I really enjoyed reading this Amigo!

~ cottage
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10 posted 03-26-2002 10:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'd say you met that challenge very well, amigo....you paint a very realistic picture here..
 
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