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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rendezvous Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Will you meet me in the moonlight where the rays of love shine over the mountain there I await your touch lover come meet me soon underneath soft glowing of a rendezvous moon Foreverly, love~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Foreverly Love....so romantic...you always leave me sighing...I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie darling sister of my heart this was as usual for you utterly utterly wonderful. Its such a special read each word flowing into the next. No one writes the way you do darling girl nobody. And no one MOONS the way you do, as always it’s a perfectly splendid moon. It glows with your love and I love it love it love it You are an utterly UTTERLY superb writer and this is fabulous. I always enjoy your writing and this is just sooooooo wonderful. Such beauty is amazing to see you’ve brought tears of delight to my eyes. Wonderful Utterly wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
foreverly (love that word)this is beautiful Marge |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
No better place to rendezvous! Pretty, pretty. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I loved this Marge, even though that color blinded me until I highlighted it to read it A very gorgeous poem |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What a neat piece. It belongs on a card... so people can place it on a pillow case!!! Kat |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous, as the moon is this night (and was all DAY, as well) yer my moon poet. love ya, marge! OH...and this planted a seed of inspiration in me, would you mind terribly if I used the title? (that is, if it ever grows into a poem?  )gotta hug ya too before I go! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I LOOOOVE your moon stuff.. and "foreverly".. excellent word... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Anything about the moon gets to me, and this one was beautiful Marge. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Got the place need the time.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The trouble with a rendezvous Is... here I am... where are you?? Ooooops... the story of my life slipped in there. *G* I loved this, Marge... It's worth having time fly too fast for these slow feet just to read your monthly moons. *S* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge, no better place to meet....Love this...soft and so tender....  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Margie since my mum refers to you as her sister of heart does that make you my aunt? I hope so mum says you are a fabulous sister Hi there, this utterly utterly spectacular. The flow the construction the rhythm all combine to make this a truly excellent. Mum said that there was no one who MOONED as well as you did, and she’s right this is so special YOU really are an exceptional writer. And this a superbly crafted delight. Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is a lovely romantic poem. It is just beautiful. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
the rendezvous moon I am known by many names I like this a lot Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
 It flows like soft ripples of light, Drifting down from a star cast night, To lightly land at your feet, In a visual melody so sweet. The full moon has always been a friend of mind.... to create such a gorgeous poem in it's shape ..... gets a standing ovation from me.  Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ You are just always a delight to share with~ Thanks, hon~ MarshaLove~ You can consider yourself mooned with love~ Thank you dahlink ~  SEA~ And YOU are a sweetie~ BluesSerenade~ Thank you soooooo very much~ RosePetals~ Thanks for visiting my little 'moonie'~ AmuseMi~ Awwwwwww ... thank you dear~ Serenity~ Honey child ... you KNOW I write to share ... GO FOR IT ... with my 'moon-blessings'~  Nan~ Thank you so much .. I'll get that 'moon page' stuff to you 'soon'~  Floria~ Me too ... it's so inspirtional~ Thanks gal~ Seymour~ Make the time ! !  SuthernGal~ LOL ... Love ya' gal~ GreenEyes~ Thank you dear girl~ MagicMystery~ Thank you so much ... welcome to Passions~ SmartChick~ Thank you dear girl~ Krissy~ My pleasure is to share ... thanks so much for the sweet compliments~ Love that Mum of yours too~ Lunatic~ Love that I can depend you to show up with the 'moon'~ *You all are just the GREATEST~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge Hope I'm not to late for the moon and you both lovely! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely expression Marge...James |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Marge you always amaze me with your wide range of subjects for your poems...and they all are always outstanding. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ YOU are NEVER too late~ I think it blossoms full tonight (or 'soon')~ JamesMichael~ Thanks, sweetie~ Dan~ Very nice thing to say ... and I appreciate it muchly~ You're a dear~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Well now..we moon lovers must stick together..always look forward to your shapely words and btw congratulations on the new grandchild..your pictures are darling *s hugs Marge Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Thank you so much~ It's good to see you, my friend~ Yeah .... she's a cutie pie for sure~ She's certainly stolen this Grandma's heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This leaves me breathless and I love the formation. Peaches |
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Midnight Writer Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 28Texas |
So much said in so few words..delicious! I salute you... "No matter how great you are, you'll never be greater than yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peaches~ Sorry I missed thanking you for your sweet reply. Was just 'phasing' along waiting for the next moon of glow~ MidnightWriter~ And the same apology to you ... Thank you so very much for the read and reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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