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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-02-24 05:50 PM



Dedicated to the Canadian men's hockey team


God blest Canada
ice dreams are reality
gold within our hearts

By Melissa P. Monette

© Copyright 2002 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-02-24 05:55 PM


Dear Melissa,
That captures it. Very nicely done.

Nan

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2 posted 2002-02-24 05:58 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a wonderful patriotic piece, O' Canada!!! (kiss on cheek) Way to Go Canada and U.S.A!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-24 06:00 PM


This is a neat senryu! I love these!
Go Canada

Chelsea~
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4 posted 2002-02-24 06:00 PM



obviously hockey is OUR game

well said again, missy!

cpalmer
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5 posted 2002-02-25 04:16 PM


This is great!  I am happy for Cananda and their victory! Beautiful job!
Hugs
Cindi

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