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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-24 05:20 PM


I shine just like a beacon
Whenever you are near
My limbs sometimes turn to jelly
At the sound of your voice I hear

My face beams when in your presence
As you lift me high above
How crucial you are to my happiness
As you surround me with your love

Whether we're walking through the forest
Or swimming in a sea of blue
One thing that remains so strong
Is this neverending love I feel for you

You are the colors in my rainbow
The treasure in my chest
My oasis in the desert
To me you are the best

This love I've found is so precious
How I'll treasure it and watch it grow
You mean more to me than anything
I just wanted you to know

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-24 05:37 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhhh...this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words are always so lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may love forever bring an effect of happiness to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-24 05:40 PM


And surely he must..with such wonderful words
gracing his sight....

Ariana
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Orlando, Florida
3 posted 2002-02-28 11:39 AM


Sue
He surely should know with this beautifully written piece.  If he doesn't, I know of a hammer (only kidding).  Great job putting your feelings and emotions in words.

Startime
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Canada
4 posted 2002-02-28 11:54 AM


*sigh* such love flows within the visions of your words...This poem is so beautiful...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha
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5 posted 2002-02-28 11:55 AM


Sue darling girl and no one can say that it doesn’t show, you really do shine a beacon of love here

Wonderfully written and expressed


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-02-28 12:01 PM


Nice to appreciate someone...James
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