A Common Triolet [from the Poetry Workshop!]

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-02-24 12:19 PM

Commonalities come to play
But wisdom leads me on
When hierarchies have their way
Commonalities come to play
Steadfast speakers have their say
Representatives sing their song
Commonalities come to play
But wisdom leads me on

Mistletoe Angel

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1 posted 2002-02-24 12:24 PM

WOW!!! This is a wonderful triolet, sweet friend, that's right, the media and commoners always have a tendency to be the ones that instruct us, but true wisdom comes from what we feel and understand ourselves and that is what brings us far! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

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2 posted 2002-02-24 12:44 PM

I can't say I know the parameters of a triolet, so I'd better check it out, because if this is one, it's a wonderful form. You have written an extremely pleasant piece. I enjoyed it very much. Now where is the Poetry Workshop? Is it part of piptalk? Please e-mail me.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

mirror man
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3 posted 2002-02-24 02:38 PM

There's a lot to think about here. Very good.

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2002-02-24 02:45 PM

I like this very much, and I would like to know the "how to do" of this form as well

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

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Texas, USA

5 posted 2002-02-24 06:09 PM

I've written a couple of triolets, and they weren't nearly this creative. I like this.

Nan

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-24 07:14 PM

Karilea, This is a wonderful form...lots to ponder here also. I must try one of these one day!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Mysteria

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7 posted 2002-02-25 12:41 PM

I am green with envy yes I am.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

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8 posted 2002-02-25 09:19 AM

Oh I must try this. it is lovely work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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9 posted 2002-02-25 09:02 PM

Well done....now I am going to have to break
out my Funk and Wagnalls of Poetry....and
do some reading....

Nan

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10 posted 2002-02-26 08:33 AM

This is surely more like an UNcommon Triolet... extraordinaire...

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