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Dynamism |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Into practice, on weekend's stage world turns around, into another faze, so much to do, so little time wear a golden ring, trip on a dime. so much to see and do so much malady waits for crews hospital on hill now filled with stretchers come for treatment, treated as a lecher. come away, its Sunday morn the city will fix its latent scorn; Notre Dame will become a express highway we turn around, invent new byways. out of practice, the scene needs dynamism into the streets with impact snd heroism or is it a Sunday morn with coffee and cake you wait for the children, they are sleeping in late. some scenes need great energy and force to change a map, or improve health of course so much to do, such constraints to work in world turns around into other dins. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-24-2002 03:19 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...world turns around into other dins... what a line! Darn it, IWIHWT.... THANK YOU! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Martin, This is filled with energy, I think it's one of your best. Done smoothly, too. Nan |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Montreal is doing this to me! the energy here again comes from my role in Hamlet and the prompts from the changing map of my city  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very very well done, Mr. Hamlet!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this not I that sees the ghost Madame Chip, it comes from being the father of good news, Polonius..hehe |
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