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Gossamer Wings

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Seymour Tabin
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Gossamer Wings

Chasing images of my mind
Through all the terraces that bind
Through the bevel of bedevil
Through the hearts subsonic level

Can you feel the ghost of the deem?
Can you hear the sound of the scream?
Can you feel the wet of the dew?
Hear the set of the forming new.

Can your feet step one at a time?
And can you hear the bells that chime?
Can you stop everlasting chase?
Can you find the door of the place?

These are phantom of my alas
These are the demons along the pass.
This is the substance of my ID
This is the fire in the grid.

These are the phantoms fly my sky
With the gossamer wings of why


© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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In the sheen of gossamer wing
in the dew of footstep's spring
'neath the willow of all recall
is where I stand in silent stall

for I would read the words again
of the love you gave, and then
I would read them to inspire
all the poets to seek yet higher...

thank you Sy...
for the butterflies
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Sweet Sunshine,
Kethry
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Sy,
for the fire of inspire
I give thanks from mire.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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Sy,
your words always seem to inspire me.You have doen great once again.
Peaches
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yes, I hear the bells in chime ...
resonating from your wisdoms rhyme.
yes, I feel the day's dawning dew of new ...
each morn as the sun rises upon versed view of you.

yes, I know the path to the place ...
it's just beyond our minds entwined in trace.
I've no fear of ghostly screams of deem ...
I'm safe here in our rhyme scheme dreams.

Let those phantoms fly on by ...
the sky will sigh and they'll become butterflies.



*winkiewinkie*




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Keth,
Good thought, thank you.

Sweet Peaches, Love your comment.

JM,
You always bring a smile to my face
And a wile of depart.
May the Budda's of Budda
Keep you a part.
Of the butterflies in my heart.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

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YAY!!! I love butterflies so much, this is soooooo cute and your wonderful imagery makes the vision spectacular! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-24-2002 12:50 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Big thanks to you Noah.
Madame Chipmunk
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I loved this one, Sy!

Can your feet step one at a time?
And can you hear the bells that chime?
Can you stop everlasting chase?
Can you find the door of the place?

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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Well, you still write great poetry, even if a little rain does scare ya away from travelling!!! Lol. You missed a great day Sy.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Nicely done, my fair-weather friend
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12 posted 02-25-2002 01:20 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Oh this was a pretty one, and gossamer wings are my favorite things!

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

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wow! not what I expected by the title and more awesome! what a nice surprise
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Such a great verse. We all have those phantoms of periodic haunt..I try to make mine more afraid of me than I am them. LOL. Let your love fly..Sy!..love this!!

Sincerely,
Regina
Seymour Tabin
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Lyra,


Sorry Tracey,
Spoke to Mike and in spite of the rain he had a good time. Maybe next time.

Balladeer,
That's me.

Passing Shadows,
Glad you enjoyed.

Rwood,
Love ya
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Very nice seymour and oh yes, there it is again, that ryhthm...lovely work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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Floria,
Lovely response, thank you.
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Seymour~
Dusting off these 'wings'
to my delight ...
they still take
poetic flight~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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