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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-02-23 10:33 PM


“BUTTERFLY KISS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Walked in the meadow
among rainbows after
the rain, tranquility
all around…

Little ones flying
here and there,
of many different
shades I could see…

One touched me on the
lips, a butterfly kiss,
tender, delicate, and
then gone…

Thought it was you,
when your innocence
touched me,
the day our
lips softly met…
~~~~



© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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1 posted 2002-02-23 10:36 PM


As a speaker for the butterflies of the world..."we thank you for the essence of beauty you bring!!"

Stunning...an astounding vision!




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2 posted 2002-02-23 10:39 PM


Thought it was you,
when your innocence
touched me"


Y E S

I adore this, so soft and delicate.....this touches me in so many ways, a keeper Bill~ thank you....


  Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-23-2002 10:39 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-02-23 10:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a soft and tender poem, sweet friend, I love it! (big hugggsssss) May the butterfly of your heart forever flitter with innocence in your heart and kiss the nectar of your love for her always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ShadowRider
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4 posted 2002-02-23 11:17 PM


Bill, i believe, those tender glancing kisses from our Other Heart
are the warmest, most special of all.  They frame so well what the emotion
of Love really is.  
This touches gently, Bill, but with memoried force.
tSR

butterflykiss989
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5 posted 2002-02-23 11:25 PM


As you can see I myself am a fan of those wonderful butterfly kisses so I enjoyed you poem very much...
Poet deVine
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6 posted 2002-02-24 09:19 AM


Oh this is lovely!!!
Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-02-24 09:29 AM



thank you for the memories in this...

there is a magic in a light
when one stalls in butterfly flight
to land upon a human being
and can one imagine such a scene?

to think a butterfly would think me
to be a rose in its scenery
to alight in flight upon a fling
then to take off again upon its wing

to have left a vision of awesome recall
when one is touched by a butterfly's stall...

Kethry
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8 posted 2002-02-24 09:41 AM


Beautiful butterfly memories.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



peaches73533
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9 posted 2002-02-24 09:56 AM


Bill,
Thanks for sharing these butterfly kisses.I love it all.Very well done here.
peaches

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10 posted 2002-02-24 10:06 AM


Very nice Bill, the delicate touch..
Sandra

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