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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-02-23 09:16 PM



She is a girl with a beautiful mind
and she lives in Gosford Park
She is a dancer and dreams a lot
of the Lord of the Rings when it's dark
She has set her mind on Moulin Rouge
for she is longing for the fame
But dancing in your bedroom…?
well you know, it's not the same


"This is a challenge poem (see the Challenge Forum for details). ALL replies MUST be in verse form. Your cooperation is appreciated"


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-23 09:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo clever and cute, sweet friend, I believe there are many who dream to be Hollywood stars and they can't help but dance and stand-up to improv their dreams! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is a wonderful challenge! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-23-2002 09:27 PM).]

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2002-02-23 09:46 PM


Titia, I love the imagery in this one. You have a wonderful way of presenting the essence of a character.
Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2002-02-23 09:49 PM


You two my dears, you didn't read it all towards the end
The line Poet deVine has written, is really what she ment.
So come back in and rhyme the lines you've send


Titia


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (02-23-2002 09:52 PM).]

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-02-23 10:04 PM


You wrote a verse so witty
I smiled with every line
with phrase you met
the challenge from Poet deVine!



amusemi
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5 posted 2002-02-23 10:15 PM


Ah, we're all dreamers of one kind or another!!


ecrivan
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6 posted 2002-02-24 10:16 AM



Hello Titia,

Here is a guess:

The lady I know was once in a couple
now she is free and sings on the double
in the Moulin Rouge she attracted a mate
who did not know he would see her fate.

Nicole Kidman?




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-24-2002 10:18 AM).]

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2002-02-24 10:29 AM


The titles flow with wit and style,
Composed as such, they made me smile;
A challenge met, and well indeed,
Through verse, I shall applaud your deed.

Well done Titia!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2002-02-24 11:44 AM



Ahh...what the better poets said!
Let the Oscar not go to your head
for while there is a winner here
we'd rather read a poet's cheer!

HUGS!

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2002-02-24 09:27 PM



I thank you all for being nice
Some they didn't take the advice
in replying with a verse on rhyme
Or perhaps they didn't had the time

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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