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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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0 posted 2002-02-23 05:53 PM



Sad Lovers


Feels like I forgot how to breath,
Just want to fall on my knees
Give up and hang my head
Just never again get out of bed

Dont want to continue life this way
Havent got a clue what to say
Doesn't seem to be a thing I can do
To change this lifeless, sad mood

What happened to the spark
Team were we in light and dark
Now we barely know what to say
Just to get through another day

Not the kids fault like so many others
So much pain from the past
Just tries to smother and kick our ass
Until were confused and worn at last

I love you my darling, hard and true
I know you felt the same way at one time too
I feel so sad, that this is all so hard
Is there more we can do on our part?

By
Connie mcDonald
Copyright@2001
April 5,2000


© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-12-17
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1 posted 2002-02-23 05:59 PM




(big hugggsssssss) My heart cries out to your sorrow, sweet friend, I can understand your stress and anxiety in your words to trying to make a love spark with joy and I believe strongly you are never alone and just loving unconditionally as you do and him doing the same will help you both find joy in love to treasure forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2002-02-23 07:47 PM


Oh Connie, I see this has the year 2000 on it.  I hope things are better now!!

  Kat

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
3 posted 2002-02-23 07:56 PM


The poem it's sad many couples go through that, some survive it some don't, good luck if your going through that Great expression.
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