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Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-02-23 05:51 PM

Mistake, Her or Me?

I don't think I will ever believe
That your mistake was her
Rather comming home to me

Don't you know how well I know you?
I saw your happiness when it was you two
And the mood swings when at times it was through

Your the type of person that wouldn't do well alone
Don't use that to come back home
For that would be true injustice
I've always thought you had more substance

I'm not mad at this hudge mess
But will never survive being second best
My Love, my qualities are worth much more
If true love for her,you should run to her door

By
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2001
June 12, 2000

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-23 05:55 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Connie, this is so very sad, I hope this isn't related to a current ewxperience you're facing and you have found true love that is devoted to you as you are to him! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is a wonderfully emotional poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-02-23 07:25 PM

This is a very hard place you write about. What catches my breath is the self worth that is so apparent here. To be in the midst of a heart shattering experience and still not lose the importance of self is quite a task that many fail. The essence of this concept is what I enjoy of this piece the most. Kudos!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-02-23 09:44 PM

Heart wrenching, truthful, so full of believable emotion. I really felt the emotions flowing through this. Well done, Z.

butterflykiss989
Member

since 2002-02-19

Posts 52

4 posted 2002-02-23 09:56 PM

That has to be hard... letting someone go who you love because you know they love someone else... and I agree you express the emotion that comes from that situatioin so well..

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

5 posted 2002-02-28 11:35 AM

Don't ever be second best. He has to love you as much as you love him, and if he loved you he wouldn't be with anyone else. Nicely written.

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