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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-02-23 04:54 PM


Only Two Kisses

I knew one kiss
would never do
somewhere in the middle
of kiss number two.

As her lips softly
melted into mine
my heartbeat increased
and a need was defined.

Now I yearn for
kiss number three.
For only two kisses
will never satisfy me.

JamesLee
February23
2002

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1 posted 2002-02-23 05:02 PM


James - Very good, but don't get too pushy, you might chase her off.lol  

Dave

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2 posted 2002-02-23 05:07 PM


No, James, get pushy. LOL!  Make it no less than ten kisses.

Michael Auguste~
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3 posted 2002-02-23 05:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I too dream of showering my girl in kisses so so much, ooohhh...I can't wait for that first kiss so much! (big huggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may true loves magic forever kiss your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
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4 posted 2002-02-23 07:51 PM


You're hooked!!!

Loved this!!  

walker
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5 posted 2002-02-23 07:52 PM


You know I love this.
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6 posted 2002-02-23 08:13 PM


If you will settle for a kiss from me
I will be happy to give u kiss #3
*Muah!

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7 posted 2002-02-24 02:25 AM


hi James, ya know this poem just left me with a huge smile on my face...
A very delightful read...
Hugs2USweetPoetFriend
*~coco~*

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-02-24 04:26 AM


Thank you Dave, Auguste, noah, Amusemi, Walker, Rose Petal and Coco Baci for the wonderful responses.
Actually I've already had kiss number three...this is a reflection of a desire I have to continue a rewarding experience...I enjoy her kisses so much that I feel like I can never get enough...James

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9 posted 2002-02-24 01:36 PM


and they just get better and better.
Your poems get better and better also, James.
Enjoyed.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

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10 posted 2002-02-24 02:53 PM


James, this inspires......
Startime
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11 posted 2002-02-24 08:31 PM


Oh no...no one could ever stop at just two kisses....mmmmmm wish I had even one then I would go from there...I love this, James...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ivy Rose
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12 posted 2002-02-24 10:08 PM


JamesMichael...I like this very much. In most cases, when love is involved...two kisses never do completely satisfy.

***Ivy Rose

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-02-25 01:27 AM


James - one kiss or two? Keep them going, I think she's got you...

BC

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14 posted 2002-02-25 01:39 AM


This should get you lots and lots of kisses.
Peaches

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15 posted 2002-02-25 02:15 AM


very nicely written here! I applaud you!
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16 posted 2002-02-25 09:03 AM


James 2-3-4-100,,, there is never too much, Kissing is love, and I love this expression. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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