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Open Poetry #19

Sipping Sin

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-23 04:08 PM

Sipping Sin

let me have another sip
of your sin
here hold the cup
as I pour you in
the bitter sweetness
of your taste
aching on my tongue
I can not erase
deep inner burning
as I drink you down
no matter what I do
no coolness found
I can not remove
your taste from my lips
such is the punishment
of sin in sips

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2002-02-23 04:35 PM

This is very nicely done, Helen.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-02-23 04:46 PM

Perfectly penned once more. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-02-23 05:07 PM

Helen ... this is very good : )

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-23 05:34 PM

(sigh) Awwwww, this is soooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, may you forever sip and share the beauty of love with the love of your life in bliss! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, this is so pretty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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