the mischief of the moment

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-02-23 03:46 PM

smiling; here I stand
facing the eastern sun
rising in its glory
with a fresh scent
in a capture of the dawn

smiling; there she is
in front of me with
her shadow upon my body
spreading like a drape
drawn to shade - arrested

the colours of her presence
and the mist of the feeling
spread through visions
like sights seen through
a telescope to the sun

and then she bent
in a small forward slant
like daylight falling through curtains-
clarity shone in her eyes
while her lips touched mine

and the breeze spoke,
whispering in our hearts
in those silent thoughts
of sacred devotion
in a prayer of love

the capture of that moment
and our inertiated torment
led its way to a flurry
of acts of sweet repose
leading to a bonding

yet there I stood static
while the wistful flower swayed
as if dancing in the wind
and butterfly, she kissed me
before her vanishing act

and she flew into the heart
of the smiling sun
and I smiled back to acknowledge
the fallacy of the heart
and the mischief of the moment

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and I thought, I should amuse myself... when the rays of the sun plays tricks on my eyes... maybe it was a mirage...

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (02-23-2002 03:49 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-23 03:52 PM

"and she flew into the heart
of the smiling sun
and I smiled back to acknowledge
the fallacy of the heart
and the mischief of the moment

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and I thought, I should amuse myself... when the rays of the sun plays tricks on my eyes... maybe it was a mirage..."

Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too always have such lovely visiuons and dreams like thius, and I could always swear I could feel loves first kiss from my dream girl! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-02-23 04:00 PM

Fabulous writing Sudhir...James

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-02-23 09:13 PM

lovely mood this creates, bravo

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-02-23 09:20 PM

smiling; there she is
in front of me with
her shadow upon my body
spreading like a drape
drawn to shade - arrested

the colours of her presence
and the mist of the feeling
spread through visions
like sights seen through
a telescope to the sun

and then she bent
in a small forward slant
like daylight falling through curtains-
clarity shone in her eyes
while her lips touched mine

and the breeze spoke,
whispering in our hearts
in those silent thoughts
of sacred devotion
in a prayer of love
==================================
yet there I stood static
while the wistful flower swayed
as if dancing in the wind
and butterfly, she kissed me
before her vanishing act
================================

oh good grief...now whose being brilliant
Sud ... this is incredible writing!!I love this poem...
the imagery is so unique and cool...
the anaology and metaphor clever and so effective in their impact...
this wonderful ethereal romantic poetry.
a very cool inspire here my friend...and good to see you here again.

"Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power.
We have guided missiles and misguided men."

MLK

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-02-23 09:24 PM

It is always so refreshing to read your imaginings. Thank you for sharing this magical moment.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2002-02-23 09:40 PM

Oh I love your poems so much (sigh)

and this one is just so beautiful
your muze is a lady of quality

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2002-02-24 04:53 AM

Oh my friends... thank you all so very much...

Your kindness tipped words are much appreciated...

Thanks and regards,
sudhir

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-02-24 08:11 AM

Your mischievious moments have left me smiling, my friend...this was whimsy at its best, and imagery in its finest...you played me very well with this one, Sudhir...I am so very glad you've found time to come home to us...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2002-02-24 08:45 AM

Fabulous writing beloved one, the flow and spirit left a lingering smile on my face. Truly whimiscal.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

10 posted 2002-02-24 09:12 AM

Execellent write.It flows well.
peaches

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2002-02-25 05:48 AM

O Karilea, Kethry and peaches,
many thanks to each one of you for coming by and passing on kind words of appreciation...

Regards to you,
Sudhir

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