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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-02-23 02:56 PM






Bronzed kisses
under a bronzed sky...

Were you a statue
and I the sculptor,
I could not have sculpted
your perfection, your perfect love.
But you glisten in the noonday
Sun, perfect skin roasting
to a dark tan.I view
you with awe...marvelling
at the Creator Who created you,
with such intricate detail,
with such skilled wonder.
And, I am lost in the talent
of the art, consumed by

bronzed kisses
under a bronzed sky.


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1 posted 2002-02-23 03:16 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is one of my favorites from you, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous work of art only He can create when the sun rises! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ariana
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2 posted 2002-02-28 11:33 AM


Oh goodness - how did this get on the last page without more replies.  This is excellent.  What beach did you go to???  Very descriptive words.
Startime
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3 posted 2002-02-28 11:42 AM


Oh my gosh...Ivy...this is absolutely stunning....I love it...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-02-28 11:42 AM


Ivy Rose darling heart oh how well you have crafted this wonderful poem, it’s utterly utterly excellent well written


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-02-28 12:43 PM


My, my, my, that is one wonderful picture you paint. Very very nice.

Nan

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6 posted 2002-02-28 01:00 PM


Exquisite writing Ivy Rose~
It is obvious that you've paid attention
to every last detail.  Lovely work!

vandana
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7 posted 2002-02-28 02:08 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2002-02-28 02:32 PM


nicely done... you do indeed pain ta picture for us here... I enjoyed!

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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2002-02-28 02:34 PM


Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

jwesley
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10 posted 2002-02-28 09:34 PM


What to say my friend...but W O W!  Of all of you I've read, I love this even more...
Beautiful.

jwesley

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11 posted 2002-02-28 09:40 PM


Where is my Coppertone? Love this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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