Open Poetry #19 |
Bronze Kissed Sky |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bronzed kisses under a bronzed sky... Were you a statue and I the sculptor, I could not have sculpted your perfection, your perfect love. But you glisten in the noonday Sun, perfect skin roasting to a dark tan.I view you with awe...marvelling at the Creator Who created you, with such intricate detail, with such skilled wonder. And, I am lost in the talent of the art, consumed by bronzed kisses under a bronzed sky. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is one of my favorites from you, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous work of art only He can create when the sun rises! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Oh goodness - how did this get on the last page without more replies. This is excellent. What beach did you go to??? Very descriptive words. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...Ivy...this is absolutely stunning....I love it...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ivy Rose darling heart oh how well you have crafted this wonderful poem, it’s utterly utterly excellent well written Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
My, my, my, that is one wonderful picture you paint. Very very nice. Nan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Exquisite writing Ivy Rose~ It is obvious that you've paid attention to every last detail. Lovely work! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... you do indeed pain ta picture for us here... I enjoyed! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
What to say my friend...but W O W! Of all of you I've read, I love this even more... Beautiful. jwesley |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Where is my Coppertone? Love this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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