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Drying Hearts
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Drying Hearts |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Drying Hearts ~~~ Incense bespoke without regret within a hasty reckless shower Entrusting hearts of love do split beneath a never blooming flower ~ Tears induced through heartless spieling strike the floor by anger lured Most resent their source of feeling and crucify with angry word ~ Venom drips from eyes tomorrow with deadly seeded thoughts today Roots entwining blot the sorrow but dry the hearts along the way ~~~ Crash Test Drunk Drivers ... spare the dummies! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Rex Allen...Very beautiful, poetic language displayed here. Classical style with powerful emotion. ***Ivy rose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so heartaching but beautiful, sweet friend, may these roots continue to grow and wash away the venom of sorrow and replace it with the jasmine of lifes sweetness! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rex darling boy OH MY! Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself darling boy . This simply throbs with heartache and pain, and yet it’s sooooooooo beautiful in it’s language usage. Excellent writing from you Rex absolutely excellent  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Venom drips from eyes tomorrow with deadly seeded thoughts today Rex - oooh, you certainly get right to the point with this one. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I read one like this that hurts so much, I lose all words, not even finding ones that could give comfort, as they feel so terribly inadequate... and yet I have to tell myself...it is but a poem... but I know, in order to write like this, it had to have been felt at least once... I look for your poetry, you know... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Rex hi there I was told to look out for your writing and I see that I was informed correctly your writing is magnificent. I also see that as usual my mum (Mushy) has already beaten me to it. This is so achingly beautiful I have no words to describe how this affected me, I hope that the pain you show in this was long long ago  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You have so many great phrases in this one, but especially 'never blooming flower'. I love that one. This is an outstanding poem. Nan |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou everyone ... for your kind words of encouragement, ultimately it's what keeps me going Nice to meet some new faces to, I'll be looking for you Thanks again  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Rex!! *Nancy smiling as though she had won the gold medal* This tugged at someplace deep within... very very good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, So that you won't ever forget me.~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-24-2002 08:16 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hmmmm I love how you did this, wonderful expression. floria Floria |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't ya know I love the sad ones! |
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