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Trusting You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“TRUSTING YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ This heart is fragile, yet I gave it away… To someone special, for them to play… Instead of cherish, would rather neglect… Not to know or care, how it would affect… Misery loves company, don’t believe it’s true… I wouldn’t do things like these, to you… I only want to be close, trusting you, all I ask… Didn’t think it was a lot, to take off your mask… ~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good one Bill, enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) This has a tinge of sadness in it, but this is soooooo beautiful! (sigh) You are a very loving and trusting friend and I know deep down she will always want to reveal her face to you in glimpses of eternal happiness! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I am so sorry for the pain instilled in this poem, no one deserves this. Unfortunately, the degree of injury hidden behind that mask will determine whether a person is even capable of removing it. Just know that sometimes it isn't about who you are....it's about them... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Bill. You write of this pain so well....I do hope you are not feeling it. Another of your romantic writes poet sir! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very good... too real |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good one, Bill. You know, it should not be too much to ask, but it seems that for many of us, it is. Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Trust is a 2way street...without it, no relationship is complete! Well said Bill! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The important part is that you tried...James |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
I liked this... I thought it was very well written... you can feel the emotion in your words |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is a wonderfully smooth and meaningful, there’s a lot of pain here but some when somehow you’ll find the person behind the mask. As always you write romance soooooooo well that I’m carried away on the sigh of it all. Fabulous writing so smoothly flowing and perfectly penned. Another for my library, thank you. Who is it who keeps letting you out? And who else is escaping? Well, go on get back in, if you were expecting a meal break you have a little while before the bread and water are distributed, Ahhh you mean that might be why you’re all trying to escape? Tsk it isn’t stale bread, well not very stale anyway, there aren’t any mould spots on it. Besides the mould is penicillin, it's good for you Smile    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i empathise..i liked a woman who had a similar character before and it was frustrating to have to draw her out most of the time because she was soooo diplomatic! HUGS  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Bill, I feel your pain and it hurts me so.I hope one day you'll be able to heal inside. Peaches |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, I'm just sitting here nodding my head at this one. I love it. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
These are some truthful sentiments that I know I have been through countless times. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful piece! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Misery loves company, don’t believe it’s true… I wouldn’t do things like these, to you… Bill - Well done and much enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bill hi there this is really excellent writing, I can see this writing is deep and heartfelt. Really wonderful writing  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bill hi there this is really excellent writing, I can see this writing is deep and heartfelt. Really wonderful writing Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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