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marya2
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since 2002-02-13
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0 posted 2002-02-23 11:15 AM


Wind me around again
i'm dry from losing you
turn my faucets sideways
just don't make me cry!
i'll be jambing underneath
the sink where pipes are frozen
into possibilities
once my heart sank but wait!
hey! let's thaw
attach a tail
and fly in the wind
let's sail!
Wind me around again
make me spin,
march is coming,
march me in!
Come, let's play before
the end of
knowing......
cause sometimes you know,
but you pretend you dont!
hey, that's no way to fix
a leaky faucet!
the faucet still flows
no one knows
you are lost in the drain
if you are truly lucky
you disappear and the sock
left behind never knows
what happened to you.
Look up one day
and the sock will be flying
through march winds...
wound around again
bold and restin'
in downy blue......



marya

[This message has been edited by marya2 (02-23-2002 11:21 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-23 11:20 AM




BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhh...THIS IS A FABULOUS FIRST POST, your wonderful words shine and hum the beauty of springs coming, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Marya, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! Ooohhhh...please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! We all love you so so much, I can't wait to read more of your lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marya, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
- Moderator (Passions In Poetry)

marya2
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 36

2 posted 2002-02-23 11:22 AM


wow, what a greeting, you all love me? That was fast!  thankx, appreciate it, I'm a little aggressive in my poetry and weird, so thanx for the neat words. oh love and light to you too

marya

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2002-02-23 11:26 AM


excellent poem, and welcome to Passions

Hey! have a look see if my sock is there will you?

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
4 posted 2002-02-23 12:03 PM


great metaphors

excellent use of words and sounds

very emotive!!

i enjoyed this... welcome to the blue pages.

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2002-02-23 12:04 PM


I enjoyed your poem and hope you find a home here with us. As you can see some of us are effusive in our love of people and poetry! That's what makes us so unique. We are an eclectic bunch of writers - you'll fit right in!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-02-23 12:04 PM



Welcome to Passions!  I'm going to like you...a lot!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


marya2
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 36

7 posted 2002-02-23 12:05 PM


doreen peri, you people like this?  ha ha
God, I've found a home for my silliness, thanx

poetdevine, gosh, thanx much, i thought this was stupid

marya

marya2
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since 2002-02-13
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8 posted 2002-02-23 12:06 PM


Sunshine, thanx i'll like me a lot more when i figure out how to spell, work the buttons so my replies don't multiply, and learn everyone's name!  ha ah thankx you're quite
a charming group of blue people,, I mean people

marya

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2002-02-23 12:15 PM


Welcome marya! I found this very refreshing and I do hope it's an indication of more to come!
marya2
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10 posted 2002-02-23 12:21 PM


thanks serenity quite much, i wish i h ad more time for this!!!!!

marya

alterego
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since 2002-02-23
Posts 113
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
11 posted 2002-02-23 12:39 PM


bump

[This message has been edited by alterego (02-23-2002 12:41 PM).]

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
12 posted 2002-02-23 12:49 PM


if you are truly lucky
you disappear and the sock
left behind never knows
what happened to you.

great meta4s.... i really like this your first post....Looking forward to seeing more of your work in blue
Ps do you use "april fresh" downy too?



Love, Light and Peace

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Enchantress
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Posts 35113
Canada eh.
13 posted 2002-02-23 01:16 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Great First Post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
14 posted 2002-02-23 01:21 PM


Great images and WELCOME!!!
Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA
15 posted 2002-02-23 02:28 PM


Marya...Love your style.  So unique and refreshing.  Wonderful first post.

***Ivy Rose

marya2
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 36

16 posted 2002-02-23 02:31 PM


thankx folks, ok, you LIKE this????
I'm sitting here shaking my head.
you're all quite nice. May love and light shine on everyone     
oh yes, Enchantress, i use downy and actually have been known to hug that blue bottle but I refuse to use a dryer, only a clothesline which is fantastic
except when birds poop on my underwear!!

marya

[This message has been edited by marya2 (02-23-2002 02:33 PM).]

marya2
Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36

17 posted 2002-02-23 08:08 PM




God bless you Passions in Poetry
thank you for the time I was here
now it's time to disappear
to where the peace is real at last
to where I can forget my past

((((hug))))
marya


[This message has been edited by marya2 (02-23-2002 09:16 PM).]

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