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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-02-23 10:52 AM


Loan of Heart

"Thus they bring judgment on themselves, because they
have broken their first pledge." NIV 1 Timothy 5:12

I sit alone; think lovingly of you
You've broken promises, that's what you do
I loaned you a heart, you broke it in two
My loan was defaulted, you were not true.

I've got a treasure in fine memories
And sweetheart you'll never take away these
My spirit rejoices from in'trest I've earned
So take your dead flesh to hell, let it burn.

All of my spirit is glowing with fire
My soul is aflame with hottest desire
And you're missing out; you don't pay your claim
I'm getting rich on the interest, the same.

For all my memories grow taller than tall
While you waste away in slippery fall
And a better lover, one who is pure
Soon borrows my heart; a loan to endure.

True Love in God will never, ever part.
As God pays back all gifts, each loan of heart

Loan of Heart.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
February 23, 2002


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1 posted 2002-02-23 11:08 AM




(big hugggssss) Yes, yes, He will always be there for us all and while we all experience pain and sadness, He will alwys make it up to us by promising future happiness after teaching us to love and to share compassion with all! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful wisdom! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-02-23 11:10 AM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.
((Noah))
-newell

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3 posted 2002-02-23 06:11 PM


Newell, Sounds like someone tried to do you wrong, but you were too strong to let it keep you down for long. I like the analogies used here.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-02-23 07:28 PM


Hi Sandra. Thanks for your thoughtful loving comments. Actually I wrote this poem for a dear friend of mine who was abandoned. It wasn't me. But I still feel her pain just the same.
((Sandra))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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