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oddstar
New Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-02-23 12:07 PM

Thoughts I've dreamed
As yet untold
My dreams of you unfold.
Desire unfulfilled
Passion burning
Like hot flames
Licking at my senses...

Tempting my desire further -
deeper.
It cuts into my soul
Penetrating the core of my being
Satisfying my yearning
And desire for you

Desire spent
Fingers lingering
Touching eachothers skin...
Smiles expressing
The knowledge
That we have reached
The place of dreams together.

And knowing we have much to say
So much to learn from eacheother...
How can time move do fast?
And yet stand still for seemingly an eternity?
Because you are near
And you have touched me deeply

I cannot wait for that time to unfold,
To show itself,
In all its purity.
Because simply, you have touched me deeply.

I Love You Sambox
xxx

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-02-23 12:34 PM

Dear oddstar,
That is a pretty love poem, I think you'll fit right in here.

Nan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-02-23 01:37 AM

Nice...James

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2002-02-23 02:20 AM

Oddstar, really a beautiful write! Loved it!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-02-23 02:26 AM

Welcome

"Tempting my desire further -
deeper.
It cuts into my soul
Penetrating the core of my being
Satisfying my yearning
And desire for you"

liked this part best

very nice

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-02-23 03:54 AM

Welcome, oddstar. I liked your opening poem. It's a tender and romantic write.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-02-23 07:09 AM

Welcome to Passions! Your Constructive Critique indicates you want to know what the readers really think...I think you're going to like it here, and certainly, you won't be the oddstar out. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

oddstar
New Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 2

7 posted 2002-02-23 08:25 PM

Hi all,
I'm new to this, so it was very inspiring and ecouraging to receive such a good response to what I had written... I admit that I would probably not have posted anything, had I not being encouraged. So I guess I have to thank Sam too!! I look forward to reading your work as well as including more of my own. Thanks all.

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