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b-raxz^_^
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0 posted 2002-02-23 12:04 PM


The Sight

as the sun,
aglow with a fierce rays,
sets and stops for just a second,
the sky is so brilliantly shaded,
with maroon violet and present shades of blue,

the sky darkens,
and the cresent shaped moon rises,
into the sky so marvously,
WHAT A SITE!


© Copyright 2002 Braxton Edwards - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-02-23 12:36 PM


Dear b-raxz^_^,
I liked it.

Nan

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2 posted 2002-02-23 03:57 AM


Welocme, Braxton, and this is an excellent first post. Hope to see more sunsets and moonglows from you soon.
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3 posted 2002-02-23 07:06 AM



Apparently you've been around for a while, reading, for we are certainly a SITE...

in all phases of the moon, through the dawnings and settings of the sun...you're going to like it here.

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4 posted 2002-02-23 12:37 PM


beautiful..... I think all of us here have a ting for the moon  LOL
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5 posted 2002-02-23 12:45 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, THIS IS A FABULOUS FIRST POST!!! Your gorgeous words make the moon rise as you dance upon it with inspiration, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Braxton, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! We all love you so much, we all can't wait to read more of your lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Braxton, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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6 posted 2002-02-23 01:21 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Great First Post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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7 posted 2002-02-23 01:25 PM


Hi I enjoyed your poem! Welcome to Passions and I hope you enjoy it here
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8 posted 2002-02-23 01:43 PM


what a lovely picture you paint~ !!
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9 posted 2002-02-23 02:39 PM


Welcome to Passions!!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2002-02-23 03:08 PM


b-raxz....MARVELOUS play on words to describe a setting sun and the wonder of Passions poetry site.  ***Ivy Rose
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