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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-23 12:00 PM


(I just wanted to tell all of you how much you mean to me, you are all the most wonderfrul friends I could have and I love you all so so much! This is for all of you!!!



Show Me The Passion
By: Noah Eaton
2/22/02

Down in the gorgeous meadow of Passions
Where I wed my Joanna, showered in her RosePetals
Melissa Honeybee comes buzzing sweet melodies
With Mushy, Regina Wood, and a Dark Angel

A Midnitesun sings with Irie to the northern lights
As Sunshine sings in the Suthern meadow her willowy melody with Tracey
As both an Irish and an Ivy Rose collaborate in a poetic sermon with SmartChick
As sweet tidal waves of romance flows from Susan's dream SEA

Meanwhile a Catalinamoon glows with Greeneyes in the Nightshade
As Bill Charles strums the blues with Duncan from the peak of Romance Mountain
Admiring the sweetness Enchantress, singing serenity with Cerenity
As a Silver Streak of heavenly love lights the poetic fountain

Gentle Spirit sings with Kethry like Songbirds
As Sven recites his allegro and Janet Marie spreads butterfly wings
Where Magnus recites like a modern Shakepeare with Moonlight Romeo
Nearby where Walker saunters upon the clouds with Denise

The Lady White walks down Hypnosis Lane from Dawn to dusk
Greeted with a butterflykiss from a Lost Dreamer
Waltzing with Elizabeth and Elizabeth Santos under Victorian skies of Hope
Who's on a Pilgrimage with Ctowen for the Interloper

In the wilderness, Madame Chipmunk finds her golden acorn
Crawling into the knothole of poetic inspiration with a North Carolina girl
While 1 slick lady wreathes her vandana around her in the Lonely shadows where Morcastlin blows bubbles in the meadow
Where the Balladeer recites verse with Arthur, both true troubadours to the world

Up in the skies Seymour Tabin rides dragons, puffing smoke dreams
Hopping aboard on flights of innocene and fancy with Larry C
To lands of BluesSerenades and poetic dreamers galore
But first stopping for a nice cup of Strrbux with Lucie

A Zinsser of emotions buzzes like a sitar from James Michael
As Tiersdin surfs with Suetang in the Auguste summer heat
While Wanda recites stories under the palm tress with Saunni and Corrine
Sipping back on tropical smoothies, from the adventures of Paula Finn to westerns starring Gunslinger at feat

Wayoutwalt skydives in dreams with Charisma and Doreen Peri
While Isis in the heavens with ThisDiamond strums the golden Lyer
Where Alwye and Nan roll in the Rosemary with White Doves
Where Kit shares contagious smiles to us all, as sonnets flow from the lips of Parker

From where Aimster sings her songs of love so happily and Magicmystery weaves true magic
To where Poet DeVine and brianbeaudry lights us all with inspiration so meaningful
There's poetic beauty all around, it's in all your hopes and dreams
Inspiration will always be plentiful

So with my love RosePetal and all you friends by my side
You all Amusemi in your Trillium of words, I share this gift of friendship all for you
If I have accidentley left one of you out, I am sorry, I'm new at this
But just tell me and I will be so happy to make it up to you!





[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-25-2002 10:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-23 12:08 PM


i really liked your poem it is one of the best i've seen. Keep writing your beautiful poetry

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2 posted 2002-02-23 12:32 PM


Noah! Wow! I think you got everyone in this one, and I'm amazed at the flowing, easy way it reads. Very nicely done.

Nan

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3 posted 2002-02-23 12:36 PM


Noah,
Sy's a guy...you put me with Sy! ROTFLMAO I'm man enough to handle this. Besides it was so much fun. Great job. Now go rest up for the next one.

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4 posted 2002-02-23 12:43 PM


Yanno..I just love these things..

You and Interloper are the best at them I believe.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

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5 posted 2002-02-23 12:46 PM


Yeah, yeah, yeah.  I didn't wanna be in your poem, anyway!  Just messin' with ya, Noah.  You did a great job with this one!
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6 posted 2002-02-23 01:35 AM


Looks like you know where the passion is...thanks for sharing the passion...James
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7 posted 2002-02-23 01:48 AM


OMG, this is incredible!!! I don't know how on earth you did this, but it is SOOOO cool! And, it flowed so well! What a write, My Friend, what a write! Loved it! Did I meantion OMG?...

Sauni @~~~>~~

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8 posted 2002-02-23 01:53 AM


Noah,
this is amazing....and yes, the flow is fantastic....

my favorite line...

"As sweet tidal waves of romance flows from Susan's dream SEA" (lol)

thank you sweetie for putting me in such a beautiful poem!! You are an angel

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9 posted 2002-02-23 04:43 AM


Noah, this is soooooo good!!!
Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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10 posted 2002-02-23 05:08 AM


Loved this dear friend !!
and you know what Noah ?? there is always Hope" wink
Hope

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11 posted 2002-02-23 08:32 AM


Noah,
it seems you have the poets going in two by two,Can I say I love the word thingsyou do.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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12 posted 2002-02-23 09:27 AM


Very well done sweet Noah and oh so creative!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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13 posted 2002-02-23 09:44 AM



You know, Noah, it takes time to configure tributes with our poetic names...and I don't think I can ever read enough of them, even if I am not in them...

it shows the caring we have for each other...

well done!

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14 posted 2002-02-23 09:48 AM


Noah, Very well done sweet poet, but..umm..what about me? Next time maybe. You are such a talented young man!! Chris

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15 posted 2002-02-23 09:49 AM


Love it.
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16 posted 2002-02-23 09:55 AM




Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I love you all so much!!!

Ooohhhhh...Duncan and Nightshade, I'm so happy you pointed your names weren't on originally, I said I would make it up to you and I did, your names have been added! Read it again and find out where you belong! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS)



Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-23-2002 09:56 AM).]

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17 posted 2002-02-23 09:59 AM


Hats off to you Noah ... you just keep dipping that quill

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18 posted 2002-02-23 10:03 AM


Noah,
This is a wonderful write and I really enjoyed the effort, thank you.

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19 posted 2002-02-23 10:04 AM


Noah darling boy this is simply outstanding writing, you have done so well here I don’t know how you do it. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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20 posted 2002-02-23 10:54 AM


Sweet Noah~

So lovely the words....so lovely the tribute....we are lucky you are here....to write your words of love....


Lauren~

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barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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21 posted 2002-02-23 11:01 AM


Nicely done sweetie hugss ..

            ~Vic

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22 posted 2002-02-23 12:01 PM


And a nice tribute too. Reminds me of an 'ol mom used to sing in the kitchen while fixing dinner. If I can remembber it I'll post it, or at least something close to what I can remember.

nice work, dale

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23 posted 2002-02-23 12:36 PM


Noah, You truely are a sweetheart, and such a talented one at that. As I read this I thought how neat it was how you put it all together, and than I thought what a project it must have been. Yet through it you shine like the north star, always there and guiding us along our way. Thanks Noah for thinking of me and including me.
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24 posted 2002-02-23 12:43 PM


Noah,

This is amazing!  I've only written one of these and doubt I'll do another.  They're just TOO complicated and my mind can't seem to hold concentration for that long. LOL!  Thanks for including me, my friend.  I much enjoyed!

Michael

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25 posted 2002-02-23 01:11 PM


Noah,

This is incredible. How sweet of you to include me. I could never do anything like this.

                   Dawn

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26 posted 2002-02-23 01:20 PM


whoa, im the 26th person to respond to this!
Thank you so much Noah, for mentioning me twice!! You are sooo sweet like candy darling. We all love this tribute so much!
(HUGS)

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-23-2002 01:22 PM).]

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27 posted 2002-02-23 01:22 PM


Noah, sweet angel, my friend! Thank you so much for your ever sweet love. I will always remember how lovingly and sweetly you write of everyone at Passions. And I know everyone adores you, sweet Noah.

And when you write:

As a Silver Streak of heavenly love lights the poetic fountain

I am deeply humbled, as you honor me. May God bless you abundantly, sweet Noah, Young Prince of Passions.

Very well done!!!!

((Noah))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher


[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-23-2002 01:24 PM).]

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28 posted 2002-02-23 01:33 PM


wonderful tribute!! very well put together!! nice job, Noah!!
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29 posted 2002-02-23 04:37 PM


Noah - sweet one..thanks so much for taking the time to add me to this remarkable poem. Hugs to you! Chris

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30 posted 2002-02-23 05:53 PM


Noah, you did this soooo well. Loved it
Sandra

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31 posted 2002-02-23 05:56 PM


I know this must have taken a tremendous amount of effort... but you wove it so well... only the love shows. *S* Well done!!
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32 posted 2002-02-23 06:59 PM


This is awsome Noah!!!  Very clever, I love it!

"The Lady of White walks down Hypnosis land from Dawn to Dusk"

yea!

Thanks, Noelle


"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

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33 posted 2002-02-23 07:43 PM


Noah...thank you for the billing!!!!  You are too awesome!!  I doubt I will ever attempt this...besides you do it perfectly well!!!!

THanks and

Kat

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34 posted 2002-02-23 08:48 PM


Noah, you have all of us wrapped up in a Love bundle of smiles.

Larrry, wanna come hang out under the midnitesun? LOL, Sy is already here. *sigh*
And now it's getting hot enough to melt the icecaps!

I had to come back and edit. Can you believe it? I spelled "Love" wrong the first time!?!?!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-23-2002 08:50 PM).]

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35 posted 2002-02-23 10:03 PM


OMG how cute was that.. not only was it cute but it was really well written.. I enjoyed reading it so much.. and it made me smile to see that you included me.. thanks so much...
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36 posted 2002-02-23 10:45 PM


Noah,

i don't think i can even recognise all the usernames in your poem..
thanks for undertaking what must have seemed to be a herculean task and for doing it so well...

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37 posted 2002-02-23 10:54 PM


Noah - if God were to pick an angel with the warmest heart, you would be the one...

Your the best Noah,
Bill

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38 posted 2002-02-24 01:36 AM


Noah,
What a great tribute to your friends.Shows why you are a wonderful friend and angel to all.
Peaches

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39 posted 2002-02-24 11:35 AM


Noah

You did a great job with this...I loved it!

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40 posted 2002-02-24 10:57 PM


Noah...this is so expertly done....thanks so much for including me and my golden acorn.
I am flattered!

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41 posted 2002-02-25 12:29 PM


You are so sweet Noah~
and you always write so well.
It's nice to be included!

Thanks~

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42 posted 2002-02-25 02:45 AM


Hey Larry... you think its a bad deal to be with Sy? I'll trade ya.. your Sy for my strrbux.. .. (I wonder.. does strrbux come with that frothy foamy stuff on top?)

Sweetie.. thanks for including me in the poem.. I think you did a marvelous job.. even though Larry complains to much!! huuuuuuuuuuuugs

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43 posted 2002-02-25 09:29 AM


This is a most beautiful work of art Noah, I could never do that, And you did it so well. thank you for including me. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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44 posted 2002-02-25 10:20 AM


This is an exellent write you have here, Noah. But, where do I fit in?
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45 posted 2002-02-25 04:02 PM


Hello Noah

How clever you are!  This would have taken a lot of thought and careful planning I would imagine and you did it beautifully.  Thank you for including me amongst these wonderful poets.  

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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46 posted 2002-02-25 04:14 PM


you missed me
but it doesnt matter one little bit
love arthur

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47 posted 2002-02-25 05:05 PM


You've done a fine job Noah!
This is wonderful!

~Sheri

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left by those who got there first"



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48 posted 2002-02-25 06:00 PM


thanks Noah, you did it!!! what an adorable poem!!!
You did it!! you fixed it!!! I'm not pouting any more  LOL

Love, Light and Peace,

Your friend,  Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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49 posted 2002-02-25 06:13 PM


A wonderful tribute to all the great poets here, Noah...this is truly a masterpiece of words...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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50 posted 2002-02-25 09:36 PM


Thank you Noah for this tribute to many of
the poets/poetesses here at PiP...  And I am
sure that all of them appreciate it as much
as I...even those who didn't make the list,
though that was certainly not intentional,
just a very difficult piece to construct..

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51 posted 2002-02-25 10:11 PM


Thank you, Noah! Sipping back on tropical smoothies sounds like heaven to me!

Cor

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