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poeticdreamer
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0 posted 2002-02-22 10:52 PM


Keyboard is my piano:

Playing out memories of then and now,

Fingers tap dancing across letters forming a life,

Thoughts flickering to life in electric window,

Joy and sorrow becoming partners in this waltz,

Love and hate in whirling dirvish romance song,

Mind singing from atop a melodic mountain,

Thinking just for me yet still just for you,

Unsung lyrics unorganized but oh so real,

Heart beat words tapping on your eyes door,

Rhythmic expressions waiting for an answer,

Brain in passionate concert before no audience,

Never playing solo with music named desire.





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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-02-23 12:49 PM


Oh yeah, I can't play the piano, but I like the way you play the keyboard. Nice poem.

Nan

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2 posted 2002-02-23 03:01 AM


I like this very much! well done
Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-02-23 09:15 AM



I like this! A lot! Keeping....

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-02-23 12:16 PM


What a wonderful way to look at it. I've often regretted not playing a musical instrument, now I know I can play my keyboard! Thank you for this.
doreen peri
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5 posted 2002-02-23 12:20 PM


lovely!!

(watch out! don't start playing chords like i do... the words don't come out right... hehe)

i really liked this one a lot! nice job!

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6 posted 2002-02-23 12:24 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this one, sweet friend, your beautiful wordsa always touch my heart! This is sweet music to all our ears, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-02-23 02:22 PM


poeticdreamer - sometimes at night I play my guitar with many of the same thoughts...

BC

Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2002-02-23 02:44 PM


Poeticdreamer...This is a dream of a poem. Love the imagery of the keyboard you used. Flights of fancy hidden in the fingers that softly touch the keys.

***Ivy Rose

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