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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-02-22 09:25 PM


My Sweetheart  
My Sunset  
My Sunrise

I gave my sweetheart
a broken angel.
Somehow the halo got broken
as the years passed me by.
I don't know exactly
when it happened
but she's still
beautiful in my eyes.
You see angels
can't be broken.
They'll always be
unblemished in
God's eyes.
This is exactly
the way I feel
about my angel
on this earth.
My sweetheart.
My sunset.
My sunrise.

JamesLee
February22
2002
Jin

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1 posted 2002-02-22 09:30 PM




(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a  beautiful lovely tribute to the angel of your heart! (big hugggsssss) May your love forever offer you true happoiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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2 posted 2002-02-22 09:33 PM


*sigh* oh yes...I love it, James..this poem is so beautiful and filled with the love you have for your angel....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-02-23 01:52 PM


Thank you Noah and Startime...I feel comfortable and happy with her....James
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-07-02 05:02 PM


She still has that broken angel...and I miss my sweetheart and that broken angel...it is her gift from my heart forever...James
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