Please...hold me in your arms

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Open Poetry #19

Please...hold me in your arms

BtwnRockandHardPlace
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 98
NJ, USA

0 posted 2002-02-22 07:58 PM

Please...
hold me in your arms
and dry my tears
stay with me
as I face my fears
~*~
I feel I've suffered
for so very long
but that source of suffering
will soon be gone
~*~
Please...
hold me in your arms
touch my face
stroke my hair
I'm going places
once, I'd never dare
~*~
But, I feel stronger now
Knowing you has
helped me some how
That you have taught me
to be more sure,
and I see now I can endure
~*~
Please...
hold me in your arms
for when you do
I feel safe from harm
as long as I'm close to you
~*~
I believe we met
because some higher
power from above
knew we each needed
someone to give us love
~*~
I thank you lover
for all you've done
Together we've laughed,
and cried, we listen,
and care, and had
our times of just plain fun
~*~
No matter how
our love life ends
I know for sure
we'll be forever friends
~*~
Please...
hold me in your arms
just don't let go!
I love you dearly
I think you know.

[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (02-22-2002 08:04 PM).]

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2002-02-22 08:16 PM

seems so very honest
the emotions
perfection
Thanks
Connie

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2002-02-22 08:27 PM

That's love, I liked this poem very much.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-02-22 08:34 PM

BtwnRockandHardPlace - I love this poem of openiness with ones' feelings. Nice write...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-22 09:00 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always express yourself so lovingly, this is a gorgeous poem of true emotion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-02-22 09:12 PM

"I think you know" I really liked this...James

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