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walker
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0 posted 2002-02-22 07:33 PM



You saw her
she liked your blue eyes
You kissed her
she needed a man
You slept with her
she made love to you
Then you left her stranded
without promises
without goodbyes
and you returned to me

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-02-22 07:42 PM



Do you really want to untie this web?  

You always make the reader think, Walker...well done!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-02-22 07:44 PM


walker - great write, many thoughts here to ponder...

BC

Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-02-22 07:48 PM


Every choice has undeniable consequences. And it is always the consequences that we should consider. Knowing them is wisdom. Ignoring them is folly.
((walker))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 556
kent England
4 posted 2002-02-22 07:50 PM


Hi walker this is a pain filled little scene here, luckily never happened to me. My mum would cut anyone off at the knees who did, very protective of her nestling my mum.

Really well written I hope you’ve not written this from experience


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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